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What is your most favourite place to visit in your country?

What is your most favourite place to visit in your country? Lw5D8
The place to visit in my country which I cherish the most is the Taj Mahal located in Agra. It also one of the eight wonders of the world. The monument was built by King Shah Jahan in memory of his queen Mumtaz. Thus it is symbolized as a emblem of love all over the world. I last visited the Taj Mahal when I was in the ninth standard. I still remember the excitement on looking at the majestic monument. Its structure made of marbles shined brilliantly under the bright sun. I am thankful to my parents to take to a place
The place to visit in my country which I cherish the most is the Taj Mahal located in Agra.
It
also
one of the eight wonders of the world. The monument
was built
by King Shah
Jahan
in memory of his queen
Mumtaz
.
Thus
it
is symbolized
as
a
emblem of
love
all over the world.
I
last visited the Taj Mahal when I was in the ninth standard. I
still
remember the excitement on looking at the majestic monument. Its structure made of marbles shined
brilliantly
under the bright sun. I am thankful to my parents to take to a
place
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IELTS essay What is your most favourite place to visit in your country?

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