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Descibe a newspaper or magazine you like to read.

Descibe a newspaper or magazine you like to read. NwbW2
One of my most favorite magazines to read is Cosmopolitan. This is a fashion magazine that is sold all over the world, published in many different languages and it is one of the most famous and well-known publications in the world, especially amongst women. I like read Cosmopolitan because I can learn about the latest fashion trends from around the world. I love fashion and by reading Cosmopolitan I can keep up-to-date and buy clothes that ae fashionable for the season. Even though some of the clothes they feature are expensive I can still get ideas and find simiar clothes at a cheaper price. Cosmopolitan also features many intersting articles, not just about fashion but also about politics and women's issues.
One of my most favorite magazines to read is
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trends from around the world. I
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IELTS essay Descibe a newspaper or magazine you like to read.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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