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Do you agree that each student should own a computer?

Do you agree that each student should own a computer? R0X6p

Nowadays computers utilize widely. Computer important for pupils. But this does not mean in each student should have own computer. Firstly it bring a stratification. Secondly each student can not use a computer. If every student could use a computer strata of the population would prevent it. If student have got a computer, but the internet problem will be. Another reason is own computers makes lazy a student. Since the internet has mountains of information and data, many students download or copy the articles and submit them as part of their assignment. The internet hinders student creativity and student can not be independent. If students connected internet, they do not fade the book. The traditional method - library is better because the students search leaf through the book. If we support the idea of own computer, we must first consider it is disadvantages. In conclusion, an own computer is not necessary for a student.

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