Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Scientific discoveries should be shared globally, and the government should not keep them as secrets. Use specific details and examples to support your answer. . v.1
: Scientific discoveries should be shared globally, and the government should not keep them as secrets. Use specific details and examples to support your answer. . v. 1
In the past, sporting champions were primarily thought about how to get a championship. Consequently, they had good impressions and good qualities. But these days sporting champions are doing something that can get to be famous and how to become a rich person. Then, nowadays they are only motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
I have an impression, the past sporting champions had a good desire their sports. Furthermore, They motivated by the desire to win and break the world records, and their breakthrough get a better future. However, They had not so wealth, but they did not think about, because they had a goal. For an example, They only want to become a champion for years. Then, They did not hopefully for a wage. And also, They had good qualities with sports and they are very kindly.
In these days, The sporting champions are going quite the opposite way than like past sporting champions. An account of this, The present sports get black mark. At the current time, The sporting victors mostly wanted fact is funded and popularity. Moreover, They do not think about what is going in the sport their actions. Basically, They only use one kind of path what they can get more money. Therefore, They are famous is very important. However, They can use their popularity for making loot and they are using any method to become a champion.
Finally, It is crucially important to understand that popularity and method reward cannot be the uppermost aims of any respectable sportsman
In the past, sporting
champions
were
primarily
thought
about how to
get
a championship.
Consequently
, they had
good
impressions and
good
qualities.
But
these days sporting
champions
are doing something that can
get
to be
famous
and how to become a rich person. Then, nowadays they are
only
motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be
famous
.
I have an impression, the past sporting
champions
had a
good
desire their
sports
.
Furthermore
, They motivated by the desire to win and break the world records, and their breakthrough
get
a better future.
However
, They had not
so
wealth,
but
they did not
think
about,
because
they had a goal. For an example, They
only
want to become a
champion
for years. Then, They did not
hopefully
for a wage. And
also
, They had
good
qualities with
sports and
they are
very
kindly.
In these days, The sporting
champions
are going quite the opposite
way
than like past sporting
champions
. An account of this, The present
sports
get
black mark. At the
current
time, The sporting victors
mostly
wanted fact
is funded
and popularity.
Moreover
, They do not
think
about what is going in the
sport
their actions.
Basically
, They
only
use
one kind of path what they can
get
more money.
Therefore
, They are
famous
is
very
important
.
However
, They can
use
their popularity for making
loot and
they are using any method to become a champion.
Finally
, It is
crucially
important
to understand that popularity and method reward cannot be the uppermost aims of any respectable sportsman
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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