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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.850

Life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 850
Lifestyle of people has changed rapidly with the development of modern technologies. Today’s technocrat lifestyle is comfortable and easier in many ways than some decades ago. But this modern lifestyle has also brought some anxiety and something negative along with its positive sides. Still, today’s life is the lot better and has made the world a beautiful place to live. One of the biggest advantage of today’s life is we do not have to worry much to do our day to day things. There is at least some technology or machine involved to make it easier for us. For example, we may begin at the start of a day. We don’t have to worry about if we will wake up on time. There is alarm clock to wake us. After that, many kitchen equipment like microwave oven, refrigerator comes into play to help us prepare our breakfast. Rapid development of transportation system can help us to reach our workplace within no time. We do not have to walk miles of road as earlier and become stressed out even before reaching our workplace. Computers are everywhere to assist us in our work like managing our business, doing calculation for us, storing an enormous amount of data in an effective way. There is also air conditioners, heaters at our disposal to provide us comfort in harsh weather conditions. In a nutshell, we can say that we can do whatever we want or we can make ourselves comfortable very easily with the help of technological advancements. Besides this, prevalence of internet has also added a different layer of comfort to us. We can get any product from anywhere in the world at our doorstep. We can get any information without consuming much time. We can virtually visit any places on the earth through photos and videos. Every good thing also has an adverse effect or a negativity. Modern lifestyle gives us comfort but it has grown anxiety in our mind, uncertainty in nature. Air conditions give us comfort. But CFC emitted from air conditioners has become a cause of increase in temperature. It is melting our polar ice caps and it poses a risk of flooding in many coastal cities due to rise of sea water level. We need many industries to make gadgets and machines to support our modern comfortable lifestyle. However, this industries polluted our environment so much that now we have to think about how we can get clean air to breathe or clean water to drink. This comfortable lifestyle also gives rises to many diseases like obesity. People do not want to burn their energy which is making them fat. People are getting addicted so much with the marvels of modern lifestyle that they are forgetting their social life. In conclusion, we can tell that our life is now much easier and comfortable than early years. Every comfort and our every wish is accessible to us. All thanks to technological advancement. On the other hand, we also have to think to carve down the negative effects of this modern lifestyle. That will make our world a much better place to live.
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Lifestyle
of
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people
has
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changed
rapidly
with the development of
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modern
technologies.
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Today
’s technocrat
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lifestyle
is
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comfortable
and easier in
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many
ways than
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some
decades ago.
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But
this
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modern
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lifestyle
has
also
brought
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some
anxiety and something
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negative
along with its
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positive
sides.
Still
,
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today
’s life is the lot better and has made the world a
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beautiful
place to
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live
.

One of the biggest advantage of
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today
’s life is we do not
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have to
worry
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much
to do our
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day to day
things. There is at least
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some
technology or machine involved to
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make
it easier for us.
For example
, we may
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begin
at the
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start
of a day. We don’t
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have to
worry about if we will wake up on time. There is alarm clock to wake us. After that,
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many
kitchen equipment like microwave oven, refrigerator
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comes
into play to
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help
us prepare our breakfast. Rapid development of transportation system can
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help
us to reach our workplace within no time. We do not
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have to
walk miles of road as earlier and become
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stressed
out even
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before
reaching our workplace. Computers are everywhere to assist us in our work like managing our business, doing calculation for us, storing an enormous amount of data
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in an effective way
. There is
also
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air
conditioners, heaters at our disposal to provide us
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comfort
in harsh weather conditions. In a nutshell, we can say that we can do whatever we
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
want or
we can
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make
ourselves
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comfortable
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very
easily
with the
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help
of technological advancements.

Besides
this, prevalence of internet has
also
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added
a
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different
layer of
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comfort
to us. We can
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get
any product from anywhere in the world at our doorstep. We can
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get
any information without consuming
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much
time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
can
virtually
visit any places on the earth through photos and videos.

Every
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good
thing
also
has an adverse effect or a negativity.
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Modern
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lifestyle
gives us
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comfort
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but
it has grown anxiety in our mind, uncertainty in nature.
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Air
conditions give us
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comfort
.
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But
CFC emitted from
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air
conditioners has become a cause of increase in temperature. It is melting our polar ice caps and it poses a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of flooding in
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many
coastal cities due to rise of sea water level. We need
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many
industries to
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make
gadgets and machines to support our
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modern
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comfortable
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lifestyle
.
However
,
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this
industries polluted our environment
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so
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much
that
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now
we
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have to
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think
about how we can
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get
clean
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air
to breathe or clean water to drink.

This
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comfortable
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lifestyle
also
gives rises to
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many
diseases like obesity.
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People
do not want to burn their energy which is making them
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fat
.
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People
are getting addicted
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so
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much
with the marvels of
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modern
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lifestyle
that they are forgetting their social life.

In conclusion
, we can
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tell
that our life is
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now
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much
easier and
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comfortable
than early years. Every
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comfort
and our every wish is accessible to us. All thanks to technological advancement.
On the other hand
, we
also
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have to
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think
to carve down the
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negative
effects of this
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modern
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lifestyle
. That will
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make
our world a
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much
better place to
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live
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 850

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
522 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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