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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? which of these two options do you believe would give you better about making good travel? reading about the place onlineearning information from a person v.806

which of these two options do you believe would give you better about making good travel? reading about the place onlineearning information from a person v. 806
That traveling is very important in the life of people undeniable but how we can earn information about we want to go plays a crucial role in our traveling, personally I believe that reading about the place is better. should realize the advantages of online research in having good vacation, we ponder over it much more scrupulously. the finding the best place for our holiday recently been the topic debate among families. I believe that the place a person wants to go is an important part of traveling, and these are my justification, to begin with, online research gives me a variety of information about the place I want to go. for instance, two years ago I decided to go turkey and I searched on google about beautiful cities in that country and I fined the best rout could arrive at these places. internet helped me I spend little time in traffic, therefore, I had no problem in finding the pretty place. , The second reason why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that online research helps me know the comment of a lot of people about the place I want to go. in that Travel I read comments of others in the website of Istanbul and I understood most of the people that had gone there they had really good time in that city. hence, online research helped me know different recommendations all around the word. the least but not the last when we use intent to survey about the place. we know about the history of that place and this information more reliable than aperson information that s/he tells us. for example, one of my friends said to me about a place that he liked there and when I saw that place I feel that I wasted my time to come there. Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look it from another perspective because a coin has two sides as well, sometimes website exaggerates about the place because the wan to absorb a lot of people in that place so we can use the information of the person that s/he had come there besides online research. in turn, the person can help us to have an enjoyable holiday. B taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be drown about the issue, understanding the adentages of online research for deciding where we want to go is not logical.
That traveling is
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in the life of
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people
undeniable
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how we can earn
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information
about we
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want
to go plays a crucial role in our traveling,
personally
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place
is better.
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realize the advantages of
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online
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in having
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good
vacation, we ponder over it much more
scrupulously
.
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the
finding the best
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place
for our holiday recently been the topic debate among families.

I believe that the
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place
a person
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wants
to go is an
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part of traveling, and these are my justification, to
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with,
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online
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gives me a variety of
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information
about the
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place
I
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want
to go.
for instance
, two years ago I decided to go turkey and I searched on google about
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beautiful
cities in that country and I fined the best rout could arrive at these
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places
.
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internet
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helped
me I spend
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time in traffic,
therefore
, I had no problem in finding the pretty
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place
.
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The second reason why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that
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online
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helps
me know the comment of
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a lot of
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people
about the
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place
I
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want
to go. in that Travel I read comments of others
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in the website
of Istanbul and I understood most of the
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that had gone there they had
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time in that city.
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me know
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recommendations all around the word.
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least
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not the last when we
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intent to survey about the
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.
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we
know about the history of that
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place
and this
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more reliable than
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aperson
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information
that s/he
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us.
for example
, one of my friends said to me about a
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place
that he liked there and when I
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that
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place
I feel that I wasted my time to
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there.

Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would
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look it from another perspective
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as well
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website exaggerates about the
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place
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the wan to absorb
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in that
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we can
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use
the
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of the person that s/he had
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there
besides
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online
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.
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in
turn, the person can
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us to have an enjoyable holiday.

B taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be
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drown
about the issue, understanding the
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adentages
of
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online
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research
for deciding where we
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want
to go is not logical.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay which of these two options do you believe would give you better about making good travel? reading about the place onlineearning information from a person v. 806

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
412 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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