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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improw the quality of the education, university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v.805

To improw the quality of the education, university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v. 805
That the quality of education plays an important role in the future of students and excellent education makes them find their favorite job is the undeniable fact. Should we realize the significance of university professors in the quality of education, we ponder over their life situation and how much their salaries are and the influence their salaries in the quality of education much more scrupulously. the life situation of professors and, weather if they have wealthy life help that they will have better performance in university has recently been the topic of debate among experts. I believe that if a professor earnt a lot of money they will do their job better. and these are my justification, to begin with, I had two professors when I was a student in the university, One of them had a good life and the other had a lot of money-matter problems. the earlier professor had good performance in the class and he had good relationships with students, in the other side, another professor could not do her responsibilities very good and students did not satisfy of his performances in the university, therefore, I believe that the situation of private life has influence on the quality of our work. the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising with the fact that a university professor studies the whole of his or her life and spends the time of life in the university and helps to educate persons of the society. If s/he earns much money, s/he will do his or her work better. I believe that respecting the teachers is the duty government. the last but not the last, professors do not have another source to earn money and the university should solve their financial problems because if they do not have concentrate in their job, we threat the future of students and the quality of the works the will do because low-quality education result weak engineer and doctors in the future. Having discussion this point of view I would rather look at it from another perspective because a coin has two sides as we, some people do their job because they love it high salaries absorb people that do not that job and only do that for money. By taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can drown about the issue, underestimating the significance of the life situation and having wilfully life is not logical. attending to the issue meticulously contributes to paying university professors more than the past unless they have a good life to have better performance in the university.
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important
role in the future of
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students
and excellent
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education
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makes
them find their favorite
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job
is the undeniable fact. Should we realize the significance of
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university
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professors
in the
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quality
of
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education
, we ponder over their
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life
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situation
and how much their salaries are and the influence their salaries in the
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quality
of
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education
much more
scrupulously
.
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the
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life
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situation
of
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professors
and, weather if they have wealthy
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life
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help
that they will have
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better
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performance
in
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university
has recently been the topic of debate among experts.

I believe that if a
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professor
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a lot of
money they will do their
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job
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better
.
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and
these are my justification, to
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begin
with, I had two
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professors
when I was a
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student
in the
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university
, One of them had a
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good
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life
and the other had
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a lot of
money-matter problems.
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the
earlier
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professor
had
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good
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performance
in the
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class and
he had
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good
relationships with
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students
, in the other side, another
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professor
could not do her responsibilities
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very
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good
and
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students
did not satisfy of his
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performances
in the
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university
,
therefore
, I believe that the
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situation
of private
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life
has influence on the
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quality
of our work.
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the
second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising with the fact that a
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university
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professor
studies the whole of
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his or her
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life
and spends the time of
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life
in the
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university
and
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helps
to educate persons of the society. If s/he earns much money, s/he will do
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his or her
work
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better
. I believe that respecting the teachers is the duty
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government
.
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the
last
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not the last,
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professors
do not have another source to earn money and the
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university
should solve their financial problems
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because
if they do not have concentrate in their
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job
, we threat the future of
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students
and the
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quality
of the works
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the
will do
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low-quality
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education
result weak engineer and doctors in the future.

Having discussion this point of view I would
rather
look at it from another perspective
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because
a coin has two sides as we,
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some
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people
do their
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job
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because
they
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love
it high salaries absorb
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people
that do not that
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job
and
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only
do that for money.

By taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can drown about the issue, underestimating the significance of the
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life
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situation
and having
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wilfully
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life
is not logical.
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attending
to the issue
meticulously
contributes to paying
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university
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professors
more than the past unless they have a
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good
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life
to have
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better
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performance
in the
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university
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
65Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay To improw the quality of the education, university should spend more money on salaries for university professors. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v. 805

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
434 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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