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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.755

People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 755
The past decades have witnessed huge progress in human rights around the globe, including the freedom of speech. People now are able to express opinions freely. However, some people still stand the point that one should not state his or her real opinions if others disapprove of it. In my opinion, people should speak out bravely without fear of disagreement. First of all, only when people dare to speak frankly and argue fearlessly, can creativity be stimulated in that society. Evidences in the history have proven that great inventions always come with doubt and argument, which is a stimulus for making the invention better. For example, when the camera was invented, the opponents thought it a machine with evil force/power, which will do harm to human. Apparently, this is not true. From this case, we can see that disagreement is not necessarily a bad thing and it can encourage innovation. What’s more, people can realize their prejudice and parochialism if they speak their minds despite argument against them. One of the reasons why people refuse to state their true thoughts when facing challenges is that they do not want to be criticized and are afraid of losing face. Instead, it is more important for people to reflect on those criticism, revise the wrong way they think, so that they can gain experience, broaden their minds, make improvements and finally become a wiser person. Therefore, people should express their ideas directly even though opponents would deny. Last but not the least, those who have the courage to give free speech regardless of disagreement from others are more likely to be respected by others. When studying in school or working in the company, we are always encouraged to express our own ideas even our ideas are different from the teachers’ or the employees’. In fact, something new can bring development. From my own case, I can see that people who can show some ideas different from others are usually the top students in the class and the teacher will appreciate or focus on them more than others. This essay discussed that stating opinions frankly despite others’ disagreement can spur creativity in society, help eliminate the prejudice and misunderstanding against others and earn more respect as well as appreciation. In conclusion, disagreement do not mean there must be something wrong with the ideas. What that means, in fact, is that something great has shown in your mind. People should bravely express their true ideas without any consideration about the possible criticism.
The past decades have witnessed huge progress in human rights around the globe, including the freedom of speech.
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People
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now
are able to
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express
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opinions
freely
.
However
,
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some
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people
still
stand the point that one should not state
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his or her
real
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opinions
if others disapprove of it. In my
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opinion
,
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people
should speak out
bravely
without fear of disagreement.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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only
when
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people
dare to speak
frankly
and argue
fearlessly
, can creativity
be stimulated
in that society. Evidences in the history have proven that great inventions always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with doubt and argument, which is a stimulus for making the invention better.
For example
, when the camera
was invented
, the opponents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it a machine with evil force/power, which will do harm to human.
Apparently
, this is not true. From this case, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that
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disagreement
is not
necessarily
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
thing and it can encourage innovation.

What’s more,
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people
can realize their prejudice and parochialism if they speak their minds despite argument against them. One of the reasons why
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people
refuse to state their true thoughts when facing challenges is that they do not want to
be criticized
and are afraid of losing
The noun should be probably in the plural form: "faces".
face
.
Instead
, it is more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for
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people
to reflect on
Did you mean "this criticism" or "those criticisms"?
those criticism
, revise the
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wrong
way they
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think
,
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so
that they can gain experience, broaden their minds,
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make
improvements and
finally
become a wiser person.
Therefore
,
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people
should
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express
their
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ideas
directly
even though
opponents would deny.

Last
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but
not the least, those who have the courage to give free speech regardless of
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disagreement
from others are more likely to
be respected
by others. When studying in school or working in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, we are always encouraged to
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express
our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
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ideas
even our
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ideas
are
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different
from the teachers’ or the employees’. In fact, something new can bring development. From my
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own
case, I can
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see
that
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people
who can
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show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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ideas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from others are
usually
the top students in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and the teacher will appreciate or focus on them more than others.

This essay discussed that stating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opinions
frankly
despite others’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disagreement
can spur creativity in society,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
eliminate the prejudice and misunderstanding against others and earn more respect
as well
as appreciation.
In conclusion
,
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disagreement
do not mean there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be something
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ideas
. What that means, in fact, is that something great has shown in your mind.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
should
bravely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
express
their true
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ideas
without any consideration about the possible criticism.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 755

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
418 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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