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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One shouldnever judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasonsand details to support your answer. v.753

One shouldnever judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasonsand details to support your answer. v. 753
A person is defined by his inner capabilities not by his physical look. Being human many times we judge people by his appearance but I strongly believe that one should never judge by his look, cloths or any physical appearance. I have a several reasons for it I will explain it below. To begin with, as I defined the beauty of a person by his thought, kindness and his strength. I would like to give an example of very famous person Mohan Das Karamchand Gandhi, he is known as the national father of India. He used to wear simple and cheap cotton cloths" dhoti" and if you got a chance to see his picture you will found him a very simple common man. However, He is one of a great person in Indian History. It was not that he does not understand the word but he was so concerned and careful for poor people that he left their fashionable clothes. So, here, I would l; like to convey this msg that before knowing the background story one should never judge anyone by his appearance. Furthermore, I believe that physical appearance is just a myth. When I was started my college, I started living in a university hostel. Every evening we used to get a chance to interact with other girls and I always wanted to interact with girls who used to wear fashionable clothes. I was a fashion freak at that time. I made many fashionable friends and I was very happy. However, one day I wanted to go hospitals for emergency checkup none of my fashionable friends came to help me. Thanks to Sidra, a simple girl, whom I never talked, she went hospital for me. That day got so ashamed of my thoughts that physical appearance is apealing. Hence, I started believing that inner beauty is defined by a persons good karma not by one' s appearance. In conclusion, I will like to convey my msg very strongly that a person is known by his thoughts, kindness and his karma
A
person
is defined
by his inner capabilities not by his
physical
look. Being human
many
times we judge
people
by his
appearance
but
I
strongly
believe that one should never judge by his look, cloths or any
physical
appearance
. I have a several reasons for
it
I will
explain
it below.

To
begin
with, as I defined the beauty of a
person
by his
thought
, kindness and his strength. I would like to give an example of
very
famous
person
Mohan
Das
Karamchand
Gandhi, he
is known
as the national father of India. He
used
to wear simple and
cheap
cotton
cloths&quot
;
dhoti&quot
; and if you
got
a chance to
see
his picture you will
found
him a
very
simple common
man
.
However
, He is one of a great
person
in Indian History. It was not that he does not understand the word
but
he was
so
concerned and
careful for
poor
people
that he
left
their
fashionable
clothes.
So
, here, I would l; like to convey this
msg
that
before
knowing the background story one should never judge anyone by his appearance.

Furthermore
, I believe that
physical
appearance
is
just
a myth. When I was
started
my college, I
started
living in a university hostel. Every evening we
used
to
get
a chance to interact with other girls and I always wanted to interact with girls who
used
to wear
fashionable
clothes. I was a fashion freak at that time. I made
many
fashionable
friends and
I was
very
happy.
However
, one day I wanted to go hospitals for emergency checkup none of my
fashionable
friends came to
help
me. Thanks to
Sidra
, a simple girl, whom I never talked, she went hospital for me. That day
got
so
ashamed of my thoughts that
physical
appearance
is
apealing
.
Hence
, I
started
believing that inner beauty
is defined
by a
persons
good
karma not by
one&
#039; s appearance.

In conclusion
, I
will
like to convey my
msg
very
strongly
that a
person
is known
by his thoughts, kindness and his karma
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS essay One shouldnever judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasonsand details to support your answer. v. 753

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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