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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In many places, students aged 12-18 are typically taught different subjects by differentteachers while younger students are usually taught by only one teacher all day long. However, it would also benefi v.743

In many places, students aged 12-18 are typically taught different subjects by differentteachers while younger students are usually taught by only one teacher all day long. However, it would also benefi v. 743
The experience of being a young student is something that will affect people not only in their childhood, but will remain with them until they die. This idea makes it very clear that any small variation in the education process can make a strong impact on the outcomes of it. Therefore, I don’t think that the fact that young students get to be taught by the same teacher for different subjects is something that can be changed easily. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss that and state my position. I disagree with the statement for many reasons. First, the young age is a very sensitive age where children build their characters and learn how to behave. And, usually kids take time before they trust new people, so being taught by a single teacher will make sure that they have the sufficient time to build this trust. The other reason is related to the teacher himself. He/She will be able to teach and examine his/her student on different subjects, which will help him/her to construct a well-organized mental frame about each student’s skills, and maybe can give them recommendations on how they can improve their performance. On the other hand, the teacher should develop special skills and different styles of teaching so that he/she can him/her students understand them. This is the only reason that, I think, can make the choice of having more the one teacher a preferable one. In summary, I don’t agree with the concept of having more than one teacher as long as a single teacher can handle the diversity of the subjects and perform efficiently in the class.
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variation in the education process can
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make
a strong impact on the outcomes of it.
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, I don’t
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think
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teacher
for
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different
subjects is something that can be
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changed
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. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss that and state my position.

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reasons.
First
, the young age is a
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sensitive age where children build their characters and learn how to behave. And,
usually
kids take time
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before
they trust new
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people
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being taught
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teacher
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make
sure that they have the sufficient time to build this trust. The other reason
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himself. He/She will be able to teach and examine his/her
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student
on
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different
subjects, which will
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help
him/her to construct a well-organized mental frame about each
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student’s
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skills
, and maybe can give them recommendations on how they can
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improve
their performance.

On the other hand
, the
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teacher
should develop special
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skills
and
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different
styles of teaching
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so
that he/she can him/her
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students
understand them. This is the
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, can
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make
the choice of having more the one
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teacher
a preferable one.

In summary, I don’t
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agree
with the concept of having more than one
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teacher
as long as a single
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can handle the diversity of the subjects and perform
efficiently
in the
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class
.
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IELTS essay In many places, students aged 12-18 are typically taught different subjects by differentteachers while younger students are usually taught by only one teacher all day long. However, it would also benefi v. 743

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4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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