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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time. v.314

It is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time. v. 314
More jobs today are being done by artificially intelligent robots, than a decade ago. While repetitive jobs will eventually be done by robots, it is unlikely that work requiring a human touch will be overtaken. This write-up will discuss why ultimately only a few jobs will be done by humans. Specific jobs that are not as skillfull and complex, but are repetitive, can be done by robots effectively. Robots are less likely to be bored and lose efficiency, which means increased production levels. In factories, for instance, assembly lines are manned by robots to size, package and make products store-ready, thus reducing error and wastage. For these reasons, robots with artificial intelligence will increasingly replace the jobs that are labour-intensive and repeated. In contrast, there are jobs that require a 'human touch' which can never be achieved by robots, or cyborgs for that matter. These jobs require complex and subjective decision making which are not algorithmic. For example, in the fields of education, medicine, social service, etc. , the human element of the jobs will be as complex as the number of humans involved, making automation of the service an impossibility. Hence, these aspects will never be taken over by robots, ever. In conclusion, the likelihood of robots replacing most human employment is imminent. Therefore, while labour-intensive jobs might be fully taken over by robots, jobs requiring complex human analysis will still be done by people. Consequently, only some human-intensive jobs will be available in an increasingly artificial intelligence work environment.
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touch will
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and
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,
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are repetitive, can
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effectively
. Robots are less likely to
be bored
and lose efficiency, which means increased production levels. In factories,
for instance
, assembly lines
are manned
by robots to size, package and
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make
products store-ready,
thus
reducing error and wastage. For these reasons, robots with artificial intelligence will
increasingly
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jobs
that are
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labour-intensive
and repeated.

In contrast
, there are
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that require a 'human touch' which can never
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complex
and subjective
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as the number of
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involved, making automation of the service an impossibility.
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, these aspects will never
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In conclusion
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human
employment is imminent.
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, while
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7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time. v. 314

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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