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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, it is important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. v.293

In today's world, it is important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. v. 293
Housing has become an imperative topic in today’s world because the world’s population is on a rising trend. Due to the lack of building space, construction in the countryside seems to be a viable option, however it continues to be a debatable topic since preservation is an important issue of concern. This essay will examine how construction can be done moderately to protect mother earth as well as provide housing. Urbanisation in the countryside has played a vital role in increasing the world’s globalisation and air pollution indexes. Furthermore, despite the current awareness of the environmental conditions, wildlife habitats have been destroyed due to man’s greed. For instance, In India, the endangered tiger has now become extinct due to the destruction of their natural homes. Therefore, building new homes continues, to adversely affect the environment. With the multifold increase in population new housing is necessary for survival provided that it is done in moderation to promote a healthy balance. Additionally, shelters in the woods should be made with more natural substances and in a more sustainable way. For instance, research suggests that people are increasingly moving to tree houses, particularly in more natural settings in order to reduce the burden on nature. Thus, houses can be built in a more efficient way in the outskirts to aid in ecological balance. To conclude, invading the nature due to lack of space continues become a grave issue of concern. I argue that the construction is necessary and can be done in an environmental friendly way to solve the double-fold problem of nature preservation and urbanisation.
Housing has become an imperative topic in
today
’s world
because
the world’s population is on a rising trend.
Due
to the lack of building space, construction in the countryside seems to be a viable option,
however
it continues to be a debatable topic since preservation is an
important
issue of concern. This essay will examine how construction can
be done
moderately
to protect mother earth
as well
as provide housing.

Urbanisation
in the countryside has played a vital role in increasing the world’s
globalisation
and air pollution indexes.
Furthermore
, despite the
current
awareness of the environmental conditions, wildlife habitats have been
destroyed
due
to
man
’s greed.
For instance
, In India, the endangered tiger has
now
become extinct
due
to the destruction of their natural homes.
Therefore
, building new homes continues, to
adversely
affect the environment.

With the
multifold
increase in population new housing is necessary for survival provided that it
is done
in moderation to promote a healthy balance.
Additionally
, shelters in the woods should
be made
with more natural substances and in a more sustainable way.
For instance
, research suggests that
people
are
increasingly
moving to tree
houses
,
particularly
in more natural settings in order to
reduce
the burden on nature.
Thus
,
houses
can
be built
in a more efficient way in the outskirts to aid in ecological balance.

To conclude
, invading the nature
due
to lack of space
continues become
a grave issue of concern. I argue that the construction is necessary and can
be done
in an environmental friendly way to solve the double-fold problem of nature preservation and
urbanisation
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In today's world, it is important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. v. 293

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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