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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. •Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. v.274

A zoo has no useful purpose. •Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. v. 274
Exploring university opportunities abroad has been rising across students over time. It's become a matter of pride to pursue education abroad. Students have the option of choosing their desired courses across the globe. There are always two sides to a coin, this essay will elaborate on the pros and the bane of the same. Studying abroad has become a common choice among students. The plethora of courses available is convenient for the students to choose from. Students learn about different races, religion and cultures. They become strong and independent being away from their home country. The world class facility and faculty encourages students to study abroad. Studying in the foreign land is a matter of prestige. The employment opportunities are enormous. Several students who pursue engineering in India flock to the US to pursue their Masters degree for want of better growth and standard of living. Nowadays, countries have also opened the PR option for the students in the foreign land. An example to substantiate nations like Europe do not allow the students to stay further once the course is over. However, one of the biggest negatives is the cost involved. Inadvertently, studying overseas is a very expensive affair. As a result the students are unable to pay off the education loan. The migration of students to other countries from their own home country is worrisome as the working young population gets diminished. Eventually, students do not return back to their home country. In conclusion, studying abroad should be explored. As it increases the exposure to the outside world the student becomes more aware and employable. It should be propagated widely among all the youngsters to explore university studies overseas.
Exploring university opportunities
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abroad
has been rising across
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students
over time. It's
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become
a matter of pride to pursue education
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abroad
.
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Students
have the option of choosing their desired courses across the globe. There are always two sides to a coin, this essay will elaborate on the pros and the bane of the same.

Studying
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abroad
has
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
become
a common choice among
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students
. The plethora of courses available is convenient for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to choose from.
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Students
learn about
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different
races, religion and cultures. They
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become
strong and independent being away from their home
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country
. The world
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
facility and faculty encourages
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students
to study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
. Studying in the foreign land is a matter of prestige. The employment opportunities are enormous. Several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who pursue engineering in India flock to the US to pursue their
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree for want of better growth and standard of living. Nowadays,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
have
also
opened the PR option for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in the foreign land. An example to substantiate nations like Europe do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to stay
further
once the course is over.

However
, one of the biggest negatives is the cost involved.
Inadvertently
, studying overseas is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
expensive affair.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a result the
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students
are unable to pay off the education loan. The migration of
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students
to other
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countries
from their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
home
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country
is worrisome as the working young population
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
diminished.
Eventually
,
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students
do not
Consider using "return".
return back
to their home country.

In conclusion
, studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
should
be explored
. As it increases the exposure to the outside world the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
becomes
more aware and employable. It should
be propagated
widely
among all the youngsters to explore university studies overseas.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay A zoo has no useful purpose. •Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. v. 274

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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