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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? An ability of read and write is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.264

An ability of read and write is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 264
It is important to consider the type of home when searching for a place to stay. Although some people want to stay in a flat, others feel that staying in an apartment has more benefits. In my essay, I will discuss why there are more pros than cons in living in a house compared with an apartment. One of the most significant advantages of a house is its large size. This is because household properties can easily be arranged without having anxiety over space. For example, a family consisting of five children can easily move in with their properties into a three-bedroom house, and the kids will have adequate space to play around. However, larger homes, does have a drawback in terms of maintenance. To illustrate this point, tenants have to pay more for electricity, water and gas compare to when living in a suite. Furthermore, another benefit of this type of home is that you have access to privacy. The result of this is that you do not have to share facilities with any other person. One of the main benefits of apartment is that it is less expensive to maintain. As a result, much cheaper to live in. For instance, you pay less for gas, electricity, water and even rents when compared to residing in expansive houses. Nevertheless, this type of residence has its own disadvantages in lack of space and privacy. The reason for this is because families with large properties will not have enough area to keep them and their offspring will not have enough place to play around. Also, you will have to share most of the facilities within the building such as kitchen, bathroom and dining. In conclusion, despite the benefits of staying in a suite, this comes with a huge inconvenience; I believe that comparing this with the pros and cons of living in houses, the benefits outweigh that of an apartments.
It is
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important
to consider the type of home when searching for a place to stay. Although
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
want to stay in a flat, others feel that staying in an apartment has more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefits
. In my essay, I will discuss why there are more pros than cons in living in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
compared with an apartment.

One of the most significant advantages of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
is its large size. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
household properties can
easily
be arranged
without having anxiety over space.
For example
, a family consisting of five children can
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
in with their properties into a three-bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
, and the kids will have adequate space to play around.
However
, larger homes, does have a drawback in terms of maintenance. To illustrate this point, tenants
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay more for electricity, water and gas compare to when living in a suite.
Furthermore
, another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefit
of this type of home is that you have access to privacy. The result of this is that you do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
share facilities with any other person.

One of the main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefits
of apartment is that it is less expensive to maintain.
As a result
, much cheaper to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in.
For instance
, you pay less for gas, electricity, water and even rents when compared to residing in expansive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
.
Nevertheless
, this type of residence has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
disadvantages in lack of space and privacy.
The reason for this is
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because
families with large properties will not have
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enough
area to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
them and their offspring will not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
place to play around.
Also
, you will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
share most of the facilities within the building such as kitchen, bathroom and dining.

In conclusion
, despite the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefits
of staying in a suite, this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
with a huge inconvenience; I believe that comparing this with the pros and cons of living in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefits
outweigh that of
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "an apartment" or simply "apartments"?
an apartments
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Learn everything you can, anytime you can, from anyone you can; there will always come a time when you will be grateful you did.
Sarah Caldwell

IELTS essay An ability of read and write is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 264

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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