In this day and age, ways of improving health have appeared to be a hotly debated issue in daily lives. However, the more advanced medical treatments are, the more expensive they seem to be, hence the poor cannot get access to modern medical services. Some people argue that both of the affluent and the poor should have the right to get medical treatments equally. Personally, I completely agree with this idea and believe that people’s access to proper health care should not depend on the level of their incomes.
It is undeniable that middle and lower classes have taken more serious diseases than the upper class due to lack of medical facilities, shortage of knowledgeable health care information and especially exorbitant fees. Consequently, the current situation is mainly the wealthy, not the needy, can approach to the best medical treatments. This negative trend should be dealt with by letting the poor get access to advanced medical services.
Furthermore, the main aim of inventing modern health care methods is improving people’s lives, and the mission of every hospital is to try their best to save and help their patients recover. Therefore, there should not have any discrimination against the poor during the curing process. This is not only the moral of a doctor, but also a humanitarian aspect.
In addition, the government and the more wealthy should raise funds and set up non-profit organizations which are managed to help poor and disabled people in terms of health care. Such actions may make the scale of people suffering from common diseases decline significantly.
In conclusion, every citizen has the right to access modern medical achievements irrespective of their financial status. Also, the authorities should take actions to assist the poor.
In this day and age, ways of improving
health
have appeared to be a
hotly
debated issue in daily
lives
.
However
, the more advanced
medical
treatments are, the more expensive they seem to be,
hence
the
poor
cannot
get
access
to modern
medical
services.
Some
people
argue that both of the affluent and the
poor
should have the right to
get
medical
treatments
equally
.
Personally
, I completely
agree
with this
idea
and believe that
people’s
access
to proper
health
care
should not depend on the level of their incomes.
It is undeniable that middle and lower classes have taken more serious diseases than the upper
class
due to lack of
medical
facilities, shortage of knowledgeable
health
care
information and
especially
exorbitant fees.
Consequently
, the
current
situation is
mainly
the wealthy, not the needy, can approach to the best
medical
treatments. This
negative
trend should
be dealt
with by letting the
poor
get
access
to advanced
medical
services.
Furthermore
, the main aim of inventing modern
health
care
methods is improving
people’s
lives
, and the mission of every hospital is to try their best to save and
help
their patients recover.
Therefore
, there should not have any discrimination against the
poor
during the curing process. This is not
only
the moral of a doctor,
but
also
a humanitarian aspect.
In addition
, the
government
and the more wealthy should raise funds and set up non-profit organizations which
are managed
to
help
poor
and disabled
people
in terms of
health
care
. Such actions may
make
the scale of
people
suffering from common diseases decline
significantly
.
In conclusion
, every citizen has the right to
access
modern
medical
achievements irrespective of their financial status.
Also
, the authorities should take actions to assist the
poor
.
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