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Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Newspaper and magazines are the best way of to learn about the foreign country. v.12

Newspaper and magazines are the best way of to learn about the foreign country. v. 12
As some people may hold the view that newspaper and magazines are an informative broad casting which boost peoples' knowledge about the foreign country; however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that there is a list of resources which have the priority toward the newspaper. I personally agree with the second idea. Among the countless reasons which advocate my belief, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones that persuade me to put forward this perspective. The fist exquisite reason to be mentioned is the weakness of the newspaper and magazines in the coverage of the whole subjects. It is cogently obvious that each newspaper or magazine contain limited amount of the papers and this amount cannot be accountable to cover whole subjects; besides, the several different events daily occur in all around the world, which have more vital value and importance. In this case, these events will have the priority and a major portion of the papers are allocated to these subjects. Consequently, it will be arduous for a newspaper to cover whole data and information related to a foreign country. The second reason, one should take into account this significant fact that nothing can be comparable with the living in that country to get informed about it. If an individual has the chance to live in a foreign country, he will get aware about different aspects of the living rules and values on that country in a very short duration. As a matter of fact, a training which incorporates with the experience and practical is more effective than the reading in the magazines or newspapers. For instance, one of my friends had an opportunity to live in London for three months; it is really unbelievable that he got informed about whole cultural and historical value of this country; moreover, he enhanced his English skill and now he speaks such as a native. In the approaching this issue apart from the fact mentioned above, one should consider another sublet point meticulously that internet is more reliable and holistic source of information about this task. In fact, just by plugging into network and surf the internet for short period a huge amount of the data is accessible about the different subject. The information about the foreign country is not exceptional from this fact. For instance, by searching in Wikipedia different origins about history, economic, climate, and culture are available; or by using google earth it is possible to find the direction and feel the atmosphere or the environment by 3D visual effect that it used such as you are there. To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and example lead us to the conclusion that newspaper and magazines are not an appropriate origin to get informed about the different country but that was the story in the nut shell. By and large I highly recommend to travel and visit that country or if you are not affordable for its cost use the internet as a comprehensive resource which covers every details about it.
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and
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are an informative broad casting which boost
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foreign
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;
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,
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some
others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that there is a list of resources which have the priority toward the
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newspaper
. I
personally
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agree
with the second
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idea
. Among the countless
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reasons
which advocate my belief, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones that persuade me to put forward this perspective.

The fist exquisite
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reason
to
be mentioned
is the weakness of the
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and
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magazines
in the coverage of the
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whole
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subjects
. It is
cogently
obvious that each
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newspaper
or
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magazine
contain limited amount of the papers and this amount cannot be accountable to cover
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whole
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subjects
;
besides
, the several
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different
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events
daily occur in all around the world, which have more vital value and importance.
In this case
, these
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events
will have the priority and a major portion of the papers
are allocated
to these
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subjects
.
Consequently
, it will be arduous for a
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newspaper
to cover
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whole
data and information related to a
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foreign
country.

The second
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reason
, one should take into account this significant
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fact
that nothing can be comparable with the living in that
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country
to
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get
informed about it. If an individual has the chance to
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live
in a
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foreign
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country
, he will
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get
aware about
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different
aspects of the living
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rules
and values on that
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country
in a
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very
short duration. As a matter of
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fact
, a training which incorporates with the experience and practical is more effective than the reading in the
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magazines
or
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newspapers
.
For instance
, one of my friends had an opportunity to
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live
in London for three months; it is
really
unbelievable that he
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got
informed about
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whole
cultural and historical value of this
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country
;
moreover
, he enhanced his English
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skill
and
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now
he speaks such as a native.

In the approaching this issue apart from the
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fact
mentioned above, one should consider another sublet point
meticulously
that internet is more reliable and holistic source of information about this task. In
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fact
,
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just
by plugging into network and surf the internet for short period a huge amount of the data is accessible about the
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different
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subject
. The information about the
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foreign
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country
is not exceptional from this
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fact
.
For instance
, by searching
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in Wikipedia
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different
origins about history, economic, climate, and culture are available; or by using
Did you mean "Google Earth"?
google earth
it is possible to find the direction and feel the atmosphere or the environment by 3D visual effect that it
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used
such as you are there.

To wrap it up, all aforementioned
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reasons
and example lead us to the conclusion that
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newspaper
and
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magazines
are not an appropriate origin to
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get
informed about the
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different
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country
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but
that was the story in the nut shell. By and large I
highly
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recommend to travel
and visit that
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country
or if you are not affordable for its cost
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use
the internet as a comprehensive resource which covers every
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details
about it.
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46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Newspaper and magazines are the best way of to learn about the foreign country. v. 12

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
506 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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