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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much point? I am going to analyze that thought. I acced that. Because teachers, nurses and many other proffessions work more than actors. Then, singers don't have very responsibility affair. Celebrities are often born with their talent for singingor acting. They have not spent many years at university like doctors and engineers. But they to take less money than fame people. I uncontented with this opinion. Celebrities don't have a private life. They can't live freely. They can't walk the streets as well as ordinary people. Creating one music or film are difficult. And singers, actors are work hard.
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work more than actors. Then, singers don't have
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responsibility affair. Celebrities are
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often
born with their talent for
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singingor
acting. They have not spent
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many
years at university like doctors and engineers.
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But
they to take less money than fame
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people
. I
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uncontented
with this opinion. Celebrities don't have a private life. They can't
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live
freely
. They can't walk the streets
as well
as ordinary
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people
. Creating one music or film are difficult. And singers, actors are work
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hard
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IELTS essay Do you agree or disagree that

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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