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do you agree or disagree? hether all university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field study. v.21

hether all university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field study. v. 21
In current times, the household structure has transformed, as well as family roles. There are several changes taking place and according to me they are certainly positive. A family is considered to be a small unit with parents, and their children. In recent years, seldom do families consist of grandparents. Since the establishment of laws, especially in China nuclear family is the new trend. For example: The law in China states that parents should limit themselves to two offspring. However, there are certain developments taking place in family roles. It is no longer the duty of only the husband to work, or the wife to stay at home. There are role reversals in society due to which men take care of the house while women manage the business. The stereotypical jobs for females in the home by cooking, cleaning, and caring for the children are no longer a norm. The new family structure consists of two fathers or two mothers instead of inter-sex couple. These changes are a breath of fresh air in a male dominated world for women. It throws a positive light on the hard work endured by females tirelessly working without a wage throughout their life. It is indeed without a doubt a positive amongst the various negatives faced by girls. Even advertisements push for gender equal roles. Moreover, the subordinate class has now gained some respect with support from the legislature. In conclusion, the change is worth every aspect one should be looking for after years of patriarchal dominance.
In
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current
times, the household structure has transformed,
as well
as
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family
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roles
. There are several
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changes
taking place and according to me they are
certainly
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positive
.

A
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family
is considered
to be a
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small
unit with parents, and their children. In recent years, seldom do
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families
consist of grandparents. Since the establishment of laws,
especially
in China nuclear
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family
is the new trend.
For example
: The law in China states that parents should limit themselves to two offspring.
However
, there are certain developments taking place in
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family
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
. It is no longer the duty of
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only
the husband to work, or the wife to stay at home. There are
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role
reversals in society due to which
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men
take care of the
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house
while women manage the business. The stereotypical jobs for females in the home by cooking, cleaning, and caring for the children are no longer a norm. The new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
structure consists of two fathers or two mothers
instead
of inter-sex couple.

These
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changes
are a breath of fresh air in a male dominated world for women. It throws a
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positive
light on the
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hard
work endured by females
tirelessly
working without a wage throughout their life. It is
indeed
without a doubt a
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positive
amongst the various negatives faced by girls. Even advertisements push for gender equal
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roles
.
Moreover
, the subordinate
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class
has
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now
gained
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some
respect with support from the legislature.

In conclusion
, the
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change
is worth every aspect one should be looking for after years of patriarchal dominance.
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IELTS essay hether all university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field study. v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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