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Do you agree in hosting international sports

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Majority of people thought organizing and inviting olympics has a benefits to the country. while additional people argued this opinion. I completly agree with hosting international sports regarding to it's advantages. Organizing olympics are advantageous, first of all it motivate the tourisim. In other words, to support the economy of the country for instance, the classico of Barca and Madread it was organized in Barca, however most of football fans and audience travelled to see the classico, which that means hosting international sports will attrack a variety of tourists. Moreover, it's essential way to learn other countries traditions, to give a clear example, Emarati people are common in "yola" which it has an ancient history and fulclour of the country. Frequently, it's argued by people who considered hosting sports will makes a population. Thermore, they thought visitors can change some traditions specially to children. for example, there's a significant differences in dressing, while foriegn wear in a different way which teenagers resedential like to imitiate them. In my view, I believe and agree with hosting international sport, because I really interested in learning other cultures and their traditions, theremore, I think the advantages are outweigh the disadavantages, finally I hope to explore each wonderful culture.
Majority of
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thought
organizing and inviting
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olympics
has
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a benefits
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country
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while
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argued this opinion. I
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completly
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hosting
international
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sports
regarding
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to it's advantages
. Organizing
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olympics
are advantageous,
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first of all
it
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the
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tourisim
.
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, to support the economy of the
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country
for instance
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classico
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Madread
it
was organized
in
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,
however
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fans and audience travelled to
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classico
, which that means
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hosting
international
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sports
will
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attrack
a variety of tourists.
Moreover
, it's
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way to learn other
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countries
traditions, to give a
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clear
example,
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Emarati
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people
are common in
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"
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yola
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which it has an ancient history and
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fulclour
of the
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country
.
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, it's argued by
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people
who considered
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hosting
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sports
will
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makes
a population.
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thought
visitors can
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change
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some
traditions
specially
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for
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differences
in dressing, while
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foriegn
wear in a
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different
way which
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teenagers
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resedential
like to
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hosting
international
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sport
,
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because
I
really
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theremore
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think
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disadavantages
,
finally
I hope to explore each wonderful culture.
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IELTS essay Do you agree in hosting international sports

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
205 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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