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Do tourist benefit the country they visit?

Do tourist benefit the country they visit? 2xkDb

There are people in the world who like to see the sights of a country and take pictures with it or make a memory for themselves that these people are called tourists. Usually these people are curious people who like to see the sights of a city or a country and get the necessary information, so these countries have created special tours for this purpose. This will encourage people to see other places in other countries, and it will generate income for the country so that it can be spent for the country and some of the bad places in the country can be rebuilt. But despite the fact that some countries have a lot of tourists, but they can not use it and do not reach the sights of their country, which causes them to disappear.

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people
 in the world who like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the sights of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 and take pictures with it or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a memory for themselves that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are called
 tourists.

Usually
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are curious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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see
 the sights of a city or a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the necessary information, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have created special tours for this purpose.

This will encourage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 other places in other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, and it will generate income for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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so
 that it can be spent
 for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 and If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
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bad
 places in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 can be rebuilt.

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But
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some
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countries
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 tourists, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it and do not reach the sights of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, which causes them to disappear. 