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Do not dwell in the past for long time

Do not dwell in the past for long time QLGlb
Take out two minutes and think how you recover yourself when are you are completely broke. Think on how you again feel better for yourself, how you start living again, how you make yourself feel that you are thankful and happy that you are alive, and God has given this life to you. At such tough moments, it is very easy to hit the negative thoughts, even the negative thoughts which even don’t exist will come to our mind. At the same time, it is very difficult to think about positive things, things which can make our lives better, things which can shape us for good, things which can help us to move forward. Training your brain to not to dwell in the past is what we need to achieve. There are many ways to do this. Talk as much as about the problem openly to your close ones or to a stranger, open your heart, do not keep the things inside you, by doing this you will feel much lighter. Talk about it again and again, may be to different set of people, till the time you feel that talking about it does not bother you anymore. Do not keep anything inside you, if it does not feel right. I understand the pain past can create in your life but to grow yourself from inside you must really let go. I also agree letting go may sound easy but applying in in real life is a whole process, but I know you can do it slowly but steadily. If you are aware of your emotions, then you have already fought half the fight. Have you got friends? Yes, then go and ask them to join you for a party or just a general meeting or anything you like to do with them. Laugh as much as possible with them. If it’s a No, ask yourself what you like to do the most that makes you smile and lively, try to do that stuff every day. Yesterday cannot be changed, present can be controlled, and future can be shaped well. As Mahatma Gandhi said, You must be the change you wish to see in the world. So, as I said, Age is just a number, you can take the very first step in life to make a positive change in it today because today will never come again
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how you recover yourself when are you are completely broke.
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on how you
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better for yourself, how you
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, how you
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yourself
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that you are thankful and happy that you are alive, and God has
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this
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to you.

At such tough moments, it is
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easy to hit the
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thoughts, even the
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thoughts which even don’t exist will
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to our mind. At the same time, it is
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difficult to
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about
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things, things which can
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our
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better, things which can shape us for
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good
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forward.

Training your brain
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dwell in the past is what we need to achieve. There are
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ways to do this. Talk as much as about the problem
openly
to your close ones or to a stranger, open your heart, do not
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keep
the things inside you, by doing this you will
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much lighter. Talk about it
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and
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, may be to
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different
set of
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, till the time you
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that talking about it does not bother you anymore. Do not
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anything inside you, if it does not
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right.

I understand the pain past can create in your
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life
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to grow yourself from inside you
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letting go may sound easy
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applying
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is a whole process,
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I know you can do it
slowly
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. If you are aware of your emotions, then you have already fought half the fight.

Have you
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friends? Yes, then go and ask them to
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join
you for a party or
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a general meeting or anything you like to do with them. Laugh as much as possible with them. If it’s a No, ask yourself what you like to do the most that
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makes
you smile and lively, try to do that stuff every day.

Yesterday cannot be
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changed
, present can
be controlled
, and future can
be shaped
well. As Mahatma Gandhi said, You
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be the
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change
you wish to
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see
in the world.
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, as I said, Age is
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a number, you can take the
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first
step in
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life
to
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a
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IELTS essay Do not dwell in the past for long time

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
397 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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