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Describe the most polite person you know who this person is how you met him

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Well I would like to talk about my best friend ali in fact, I have Meet many polite person in my life being polite is one of the excellent values ——- I know Ali. From school, he was a very smart student. Ali loves to play video games and has a very competitive personality Also, he is well-known in our community as a polite person ———- First time I know about him about 20 years ago when I had just started school and worked with the computer. I saw him in my class ——- The most interesting part about him being a quiet person He’s a great problem solver He often helps me in mathematical I had never seen him eating lunch without asking to share his food with us
Well I would like to talk about my best friend
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The most interesting part about him being a quiet person

He’s a great problem solver

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me in mathematical

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IELTS essay Describe the most polite person you know who this person is how you met him

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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