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Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations? v.1

Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations? v. 1
Although some state that films can now be watched on our phones or tablets and does not require a visit to a cinema hall, other people are of an opinion that movies can be enjoyed to the fullest only in a theatre. In my opinion, I consider that the availability of movies on our phones has eased access to the world of entertainment. On the one hand, some people think that availing films on our phone has reduced the requirement of having to visit the cinema and I agree. The busy schedule and work-oriented lifestyle led in recent days has left less scope for making time for entertainment. In other words, getting access to movies at our fingertips is benefitting the working class; they get to watch movies anytime and at any place. They can watch them as per their convenience and leisure. For instance, films can be downloaded at the office and can be watched after returning home. They can start watching it at one place, pause, and continue later from the same point. Thus making it easier for everyone to have access to entertainment. On the other hand, it is often believed that if one wants to enjoy a film, it has to be watched in a cinema. This is because theatre halls come with added benefits of not getting distracted or disturbed in between. One can get to be fully involved in the movie. It is the big screen, the acoustics and the crowd around that makes watching movies more enjoyable and fun in theatres. For example, the thrill of watching an action movie can be felt better in a cinema hall. Therefore, some people enjoy watching movies in a multiplex. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that getting films on our tablets is more beneficial to all concerning time and comfort.
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some
state that films can
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now
be
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watched
on our phones or tablets and does not require a visit to a
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cinema
hall, other
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people
are of an opinion that
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movies
can
be enjoyed
to the fullest
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only
in a
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theatre
. In my opinion, I consider that the availability of
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movies
on our phones has
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eased
access to the world of entertainment.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
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think
that availing films on our phone has
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reduced
the requirement of having to visit the
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cinema
and I
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agree
. The busy schedule and work-oriented lifestyle led in recent days has
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left
less scope for making time for entertainment.
In other words
, getting access to
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movies
at our fingertips is
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benefitting
the working
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class
; they
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get
to
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watch
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movies
anytime and at any place. They can
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watch
them as per their convenience and leisure.
For instance
, films can
be downloaded
at the office and can be
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watched
after returning home. They can
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start
watching it at one place, pause, and continue later from the same point.
Thus
making it easier for everyone to have access to entertainment.

On the other hand
, it is
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often
believed that if one wants to enjoy a film, it
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has to
be
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watched
in a
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cinema
. This is
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because
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theatre
halls
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come
with
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added
benefits of not getting distracted or disturbed in between. One can
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get
to be
fully
involved in the
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movie
. It is the
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big
screen, the acoustics and the crowd around that
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makes
watching
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movies
more enjoyable and fun in
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theatres
.
For example
, the thrill of watching an action
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movie
can
be felt
better in a
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cinema
hall.
Therefore
,
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some
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people
enjoy watching
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movies
in a multiplex.

In conclusion
, while
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people
may vary in their opinion, I
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think
that getting films on our tablets is more beneficial to all concerning time and comfort.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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