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Distance learning programs cannot bring the benefits as attending collage or university. To what extent do you agree?

Distance learning programs cannot bring the benefits as attending collage or university. kgmad
In this modern era, the trend of distance learning or study from home i become popular or increasing at a high speed. However, it is generally argued by people that persuing education at college or university is more profitable for learners as compared to distance learning. I also accord with former statement due to numerous reasons. To commence with, attending colleges on regular basis assist to enhance knowledge of pupils. As, in institute students can easily share their ideas, about a particle topic, with each other and easily find their mistakes and problems with the help of their classmates and teachers which is not possible in distance learning system where students are isolated from their colleges and teachers. Moving furthering, offline education consist of face-to-face interaction between teachers and students which improve communication skill of student and remove all the hesitation of learners about public speaking. Moreover, in university student can take participate in many cultural function, which enhance their confidence and provide information about diversity of their notion. Which further become a character of a good citizen. On the other hand, online education is also beneficial in certain condition when students are unable to join their schools and universities. For instance, during corona pandemic, whole world stuck due to lockdown. So, it become difficult for students to join institutes and universities for their studies. At that time, online education become only a source for them to proceed their education as well as to remain linked with their studies. However, it is also seem that during that time children become irresponsible and careless about their studies due to more involvement in mobile phone and in some applications like video games Instagram and so on. In conclusion, after analyzing aformentioned idea, it is irrefutable to say, although distance learning assist students in certain circumstances, where there unable to join schools, yet it distracts them from their ways. Moreover, in schools student can easily inhance their communication skill, confidence as well as knowledge.
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persuing
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education
at college or
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university
is more profitable for learners as compared to
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distance
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learning
. I
also
accord with former statement due to numerous reasons.

To commence with, attending colleges on regular basis assist to enhance knowledge of pupils. As, in institute
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students
can
easily
share their
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ideas
, about a particle topic, with each other and
easily
find their mistakes and problems with the
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help
of their classmates and teachers which is not possible in
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distance
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learning
system where
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students
are isolated
from their colleges and teachers.

Moving furthering, offline
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education
consist of face-to-face interaction between teachers and
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students
which
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improve
communication
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skill
of
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student
and remove all the hesitation of learners about public speaking.
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, in
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university
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student
can take participate in
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cultural function, which enhance their confidence and provide information about diversity of their notion.
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a character of a
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good
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irresponsible and careless about their
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studies
due to more involvement in mobile phone and in
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some
applications like video games Instagram and
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aformentioned
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, it is irrefutable to say, although
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learning
assist
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in certain circumstances, where there unable to
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join
schools,
yet
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can
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inhance
their communication
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skill
, confidence
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IELTS essay Distance learning programs cannot bring the benefits as attending collage or university.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
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