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Nowadays, people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved.

Nowadays, people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions. Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved. OyGQk
It is truly said, that stress is like a chronic disease that eats a person from inside. Every day the rate of stress in people increasing day by day. It is because those people have to work for a large number of hours under stressful conditions. This essay will discuss, whether the people who are suffering from stress are because of long hours under stressful conditions or not. There are many circumstances and conditions by which people develop stress. Most of the people who are stressed out are because of their family problems and financial status. Along with this people have a lot of workloads which gradually develops stress in them. In addition to this one of the most important reasons is, everyone is running towards money to live a luxuries life and because of this, they forgot to enjoy and maintain their life and body which makes their life very stressful. There are ways to reduce stress. The first and foremost step which is very easy and free of cost treatment is to enjoy your life by talking to others maintain a balance between work life and personal life, sleep and eat well, and do regular exercise. Other than this places such as offices, schools, colleges, and universities should keep a counseling day every two weeks which tells people how to overcome stress. After analyzing all the above points, I pen down saying that nowadays students are also under great pressure and stress although they do not have longer hours class so it is wrong to say that people who work a long number of hours are very stressful. On the other hand, it is very important to deal with this problem correctly, and the above steps can be beneficial to these people.
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truly
said, that
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stress
is like a chronic disease that eats a person from inside. Every day the rate of
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stress
in
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people
increasing day by day. It is
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because
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people
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have to
work for
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a large number of
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hours
under stressful conditions. This essay will discuss, whether the
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people
who are suffering from
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stress
are
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because
of long
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hours
under stressful conditions or not.

There are
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many
circumstances and conditions by which
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people
develop
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stress
. Most of the
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people
who are
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stressed
out are
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because
of their family problems and financial status. Along with this
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people
have
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a lot of
workloads which
gradually
develops
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stress
in them.
In addition
to this one of the most
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important
reasons is, everyone is running towards money to
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live
a luxuries
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life
and
because of this
, they forgot to enjoy and maintain their
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life
and body which
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makes
their
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life
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very
stressful.

There are ways to
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reduce
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stress
. The
first
and foremost step which is
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very
easy and free of cost treatment is to enjoy your
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life
by talking to others maintain a balance between work
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life
and personal
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life
, sleep and eat well, and do regular exercise. Other than
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places such as offices, schools, colleges, and universities should
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keep
a counseling day every two weeks which
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tells
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people
how to overcome
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stress
.

After analyzing all the above points, I pen down saying that nowadays students are
also
under great pressure and
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stress
although they do not have longer
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hours
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class
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so
it is
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wrong
to say that
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people
who work a long number of
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hours
are
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very
stressful.
On the other hand
, it is
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very
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important
to deal with this problem
correctly
, and the above steps can be beneficial to these
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people
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions. Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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