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Discussion essay. Air pollution.

Discussion essay. Air pollution. mWgdd
In todays modern era, where the air pollution is rapidly on the verge to worse one of the main issues is that many humans think that environmental issues should be decisive on global scale while others rely better covenant with them nationality. There is no doubt, nowadays cars and a different factories increasing a for demage air. I will describe in this essay about sollution of the pollution and therefor l will discussed. lntroduce the view a common puff very demage for air pollution. However we use a lot of and always and we need puff but we do not know how much demage therefor we use a few of different puff this is nice our life. If someone smokes we must tell to him do not smoke as you comes demage for air pollution there we help for a less. lf you see someone, somewhere did ignited you will try stopped since a few puff comes a distance a lot of zone and villages therefor city this is very bad demage our life too. ln the second place e ride a number of and different purpose and of them exclude veru harmfull gas. lt will killed plants and small animals. As a result the world very too that is all things and alives lessed. Lastly there have got too a lot of ways for air pollution also we use less from light and cars we helped for to natur and atmosphere this is very kisefull. Also we saw plants ant trees since plants will include corbanate anhydrod gas. l agree upper opinion since their all of right idea if we do togather this work then it is good for everyone so we will prevent demage.
In
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todays
modern era, where the
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air
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pollution
is
rapidly
on the verge to worse one of the main issues is that
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many
humans
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think
that environmental issues should be decisive on global scale while others
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rely
better covenant
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with them
nationality. There is no doubt, nowadays cars and a
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different
factories increasing a for
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demage
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air
. I will
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describe
in this essay about
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sollution
of the
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pollution
and therefor l will
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discussed
.
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lntroduce
the view a common
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puff
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very
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demage
for
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air
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pollution
.
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However
we
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use
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a lot of
and
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always and
we need
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puff
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but
we do not know how much
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demage
therefor we
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use
a few of
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different
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puff
this is nice our life. If someone smokes we
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must
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tell
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to him
do not smoke as you
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comes
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demage
for
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air
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pollution
there we
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help
for
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a less
.
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lf
you
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see
someone, somewhere did
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ignited
you will try
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stopped
since a few
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puff
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comes
a distance
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a lot of zone
and villages therefor city this is
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very
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bad
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demage
our life too.
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ln
the second place e ride a number of and
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different
purpose and of them exclude
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veru
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harmfull
gas.
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lt
will
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killed
plants and
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small
animals.
As a result
the world
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very
too
that is
all things and
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alives
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lessed
.
Lastly
there have
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got
too
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a lot of
ways for
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air
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pollution
also
we
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use
less from light and cars we
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helped
for to
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natur
and atmosphere this is
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very
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kisefull
.
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Also
we
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saw
plants ant trees since plants will include
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corbanate
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anhydrod
gas.
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l
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agree
upper opinion since their all of right
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idea
if we do
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togather
this work then it is
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good
for everyone
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so
we will
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prevent
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demage
.
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IELTS essay Discussion essay. Air pollution.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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