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Discuss the unique and vital position held by the United States in the world of conspiracy theory, and the historical reasons for that position.

Discuss the unique and vital position held by the United States in the world of conspiracy theory, and the historical reasons for that position. kWYPM

Amongst the majority who were suffering through difficult times were hundreds of thousands of veterans. When they had shipped off to war, they had been promised by their government that they would be compensated for their lost time (time they could have spent in school, on their farms, or at their jobs). That compensation would be paid in the form of a bonus, but the bonuses were not due to be paid out until 1945 (by which time many of the veterans might well be dead).

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