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Discuss the reasons of Brain-drain. Describe its effects on their host and motherland.

Discuss the reasons of Brain-drain. Describe its effects on their host and motherland. 0pnPl
The term brain drain has recently come into use for describing the flight of talent from one country to another. This ongoing phenomena has been happening from past to present. They always need better jobs and freedom to preserve their very lives. The migrants give a lot of contributions to the recipient country. They help reduce labor shortages for skilled personal and also attract international traders through their foreign knowledge and language skills. Migrants also bring new skills and experience. Skilled migrants do not add any cost to the government in education or training because most migrants come in their youth. Also, they pay taxes which will help sustain the aged population. The effects of brain drain help the host country achieve a sustainable economic development. The movement of skilled personnel can have a harmful effect on the donor countries, especially in the developing countries. The emigration deprives the home country of the skilled manpower that they need. Even though they assist their country of origin through bank deposits and investments, their contributions are limited. Their migrated country gets more benefits while the home country spends a lot of money for their development. Every country has its own responsibility to provide enough facility to excellent personalities if they need their service. The donor countries have hardly any right to complain to brain drain because they are not able to assure better facilities, better living conditions and utilisation of their talent in the country of their birth. Actually, the experts can be forced to leave their country because of inadequacies and lack of opportunities.
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for describing the flight of talent from one
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to another. This ongoing phenomena
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migrants
give
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a lot of
contributions to the recipient
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country
. They
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help
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reduce
labor shortages for
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skilled
personal and
also
attract international traders through their foreign knowledge and language
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skills
.
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Migrants
also
bring new
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skills
and experience.
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Skilled
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migrants
do not
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add
any cost to the
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government
in education or training
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because
most
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migrants
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come
in their youth.
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, they pay taxes which will
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help
sustain the aged population. The effects of brain drain
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help
the host
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country
achieve a sustainable economic development.

The movement of
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skilled
personnel can have a harmful effect on the donor
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countries
,
especially
in the developing
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countries
.
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The
emigration deprives the home
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country
of the
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skilled
manpower that they need.
Even though
they assist their
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country
of origin through bank deposits and investments, their contributions
are limited
. Their migrated
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country
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gets
more benefits while the home
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country
spends
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a lot of
money for their development. Every
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country
has its
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own
responsibility to provide
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enough
facility to excellent personalities if they need their service.

The donor
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countries
have hardly any right to complain to brain drain
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because
they are not able to assure better facilities, better living conditions and
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utilisation
of their talent in the
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country
of their birth. Actually, the experts can
be forced
to
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leave
their
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country
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because
of inadequacies and lack of opportunities.
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IELTS essay Discuss the reasons of Brain-drain. Describe its effects on their host and motherland.

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