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Discuss pros and cons of e-books.

Discuss pros and cons of e-books. V0llA
Nowadays, due to internet, a lot of people prefer to use electronic books rather than paper books. A number of people believe that it is a well step while, others think that it is not good. The essay discusses pros as well as cons of the e-books. To begin with, pros of e-books. Firstly, electronic books are extremely easy to carry from one location to another location due to the fact, pupils are able to read electronic books at anytime and anywhere. Apart from this, public can not only download or save the books, but also can share that books with their relatives and friends. Moreover, due to development of technology, book readers are able to do some changes in e-books for example highlight essential words, add some information and many more. Lastly, e-books are extremely good, due to the fact, paper books made from trees on the contrary, e-books are not. On the flip side, cons of e-book. Some people think that from digital books, there are lots of negative impacts occurs for example it stresses the eye, lack of sleep, change into behavior due to spend more time to read online books, and a lot of other impacts. Further more, from advertisement on the internet, people are not able to focus into their reading and they waste their time. In conclusion, e-books not only reduce effort of humans, but also save their time by providing quickly information. It is a good development of technology due to the fact, from electronic books, pupils are able to read as well as gain their knowledge at anytime and anywhere.
Nowadays,
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due
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a lot of
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people
prefer to
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use
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electronic
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books
rather
than paper
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books
. A number of
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people
believe that it is a well step while, others
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think
that it is not
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good
. The essay discusses pros
as well
as cons of the e-books.

To
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with, pros of e-books.
Firstly
,
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electronic
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books
are
extremely
easy to carry from one location to another location
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due
to the fact, pupils are
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able
to read
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electronic
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books
at anytime and anywhere. Apart from this, public can not
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only
download or save the
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books
,
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but
also
can share that
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books
with their relatives and friends.
Moreover
,
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due
to development of technology,
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book
readers are
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able
to do
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some
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changes
in e-books
for example
highlight essential words,
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add
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some
information and
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many
more.
Lastly
, e-books are
extremely
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good
,
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due
to the fact, paper
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books
made from trees
on the contrary
, e-books are not.

On the flip side, cons of e-book.
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Some
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people
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think
that from digital
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books
, there are lots of
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negative
impacts occurs
for example
it
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stresses
the eye, lack of sleep,
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change
into behavior
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due
to spend more time to read online
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books
, and
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a lot of
other impacts.
Further
more, from advertisement on the internet,
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people
are not
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able
to focus into their
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reading and
they waste their time.

In conclusion
, e-books not
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only
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reduce
effort of humans,
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but
also
save their time by providing
quickly
information. It is a
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good
development of technology
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due
to the fact, from
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electronic
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books
, pupils are
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able
to read
as well
as gain their knowledge at anytime and anywhere.
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IELTS essay Discuss pros and cons of e-books.

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4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
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