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Discuss environmental problems in your country

Discuss environmental problems in your country 9LRRX
A: Can you see that? Global warming is a serious problem in the world and our country is no exception. B: Unfortunately, there are many environmental problems in Vietnam such as air, water, soil pollution, . . . A: Some people have a very good sense of environmental protection, they know what they should do for the environment, they regularly read news about current environmental developments, they care about it but also B: Oh I know what you want to say. Some people do not care about the environment. After they finished eating, they threw garbage into the river or street. A: I think the government needs to be stricter, promote propaganda and education about the environment. B: Yes, add the public trash and increase the number of people going to monitor the environment. A: I want to protect the environment and I can do it by using rice straws instead of plastic straws, not using plastic bottles, carrying bags when going to the supermarket. B: I believe that everybody must be responsible for saving the environment. So, my friends and I made a poster together about protect the environment to send a meaningful message to everybody. A: I just hope the environment doesn't continue to get worse. B: Me too!
A: Can you
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that? Global warming is a serious problem in the world and our country is no exception.

B: Unfortunately, there are
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many
environmental problems in Vietnam such as air, water, soil pollution
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A:
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Some
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people
have a
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very
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good
sense of environmental protection, they know what they should do for the
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environment
, they
regularly
read news about
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current
environmental developments, they care about it
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but
also


B: Oh I know what you want to say.
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Some
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people
do not care about the
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environment
. After they finished eating, they threw garbage into the river or street.

A: I
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think
the
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government
needs to be stricter, promote propaganda and education about the environment.

B: Yes,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
the public trash and increase the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
going to monitor the environment.

A: I want to protect the
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environment
and I can do it by using rice straws
instead
of plastic straws, not using plastic bottles, carrying bags when going to the supermarket.

B: I believe that everybody
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must
be responsible for saving the
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environment
.
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So
, my friends and I made a poster together about protect the
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environment
to
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send
a meaningful message to everybody.

A: I
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just
hope the
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environment
doesn't continue to
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get
worse.

B: Me too!
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IELTS essay Discuss environmental problems in your country

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
211 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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