Recently, the number of people paying their levies is gradually increasing. While some school of thought are of the ideology that paying taxes is their sole responsibility, others argue that there are more duties to be carried out in the community. This essay will discuss both views in depth.
On the one hand, it is thought by some individuals that making payment for their dues to the government is the most important role to be played in the society. This is because they believe that if they pay their tolls regularly, it can be used to help mankind. For example a study carried out in the United Kingdom show that most funds used by the government in running the country efficiently comes from the fees paid by its citizens. For this reason, they are of the viewpoint that the greatest job of every man in a society is to pay their tithe to the authority.
On the other hand, it is believed by some that there are many tasks to be done towards the public. This is owing to the fact that there are various charities that require assistance to help the less privileged. For instance, the internally displaced camps in Nigeria, which houses human beings that suffered from loss of properties as a result of a terrorist attack around their vicinity gets aid from volunteers and non-governmental organisations and not the levies paid to the country leaders. As such, they are of the belief that there is more line of actions to be taken to help humanity.
In summary, the masses are continuously encouraging taxation. The most important business to humankind is believed by some to be to wholly support the tariff placed on them by the executives, although others disagree. This essay discussed the reasons why people have varying stances on this subject matter
Recently, the number of  
people
 paying their levies is  
gradually
 increasing. While  
some
 school of  
thought
 are of the ideology that paying taxes is their sole responsibility, others argue that there are more duties to  
be carried
 out in the community. This essay will discuss both views in depth.
On the one hand, it is  
thought
 by  
some
 individuals that making payment for their dues to the  
government
 is the most  
important
 role to  
be played
 in the society. This is  
because
 they believe that if they pay their tolls  
regularly
, it can be  
used
 to  
help
 mankind.  
For example
 a study carried out in the United Kingdom  
show
 that most funds  
used
 by the  
government
 in running the country  
efficiently
  comes
 from the fees paid by its citizens.  
For this reason
, they are of the viewpoint that the greatest job of every  
man
 in a society is to pay their tithe to the authority. 
On the other hand
, it  
is believed
 by  
some
 that there are  
many
 tasks to  
be done
 towards the public. This is owing to the fact that there are various charities that require assistance to  
help
 the less privileged.  
For instance
, the  
internally
 displaced camps in Nigeria, which  
houses
 human beings that suffered from loss of properties  
as a result
 of a terrorist attack around their vicinity  
gets
 aid from volunteers and non-governmental  
organisations
 and not the levies paid to the country leaders. As such, they are of the belief that there is more line of actions to  
be taken
 to  
help
 humanity.
In summary, the masses are  
continuously
 encouraging taxation. The most  
important
 business to humankind  
is believed
 by  
some
 to be to wholly support the tariff placed on them by the executives, although others disagree. This essay discussed the reasons why  
people
 have varying stances on this  
subject matter
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