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discuss advantages and disadvantages of sending children to preschool at a young age.

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At present advance education system has been introduce some remarkable teaching methods in society, especially nursery or kindergarten schools, online education etc. . A growing number of people believe pre-school education is necessity in stating time of school programmes. After effect of this procedure has create a convenient benefits among the children and also make some difficulties in society. In this essay illustrates the pros and cons for preschool learning in childhood. One of the main benefit for this system is easy way to mingle in Environment and society. Because, in young age children has face lot of restrictions and rules from their family. However, if they go to preschool which is get better chance to explore in new environment and society. Because, they communicate with different culture students and various personality. Also if is a new circumstance to learn about our natural and sco facts before starting in academic career. For example many of nursery provide variety activities like, game, entartainment problems. Furthermore, this kind of education should provide basic knowledge for main academic subjects like, mathematics, science, social science and languages. In all pre - primary school has teach words in language, description for number and facts in science by using some kind of entartainment games. So this type of impressive method of teachings can be helpful for remember in whole life of a child. For instance, some students are going in National level mathematics competition at their young age. Similarly, every system provides some opposite reaction while this education make some financial issues because it is a expensive plan. In our area most of nursery school is carring private sector. So, a economically backward family may be difficult to manage their fees structure and also this certificate is help to get a seat in primary school easily. Therefore, Government should be open this plans in government schools. Forthermore, a minor percentage of kindergarten's procedure is not comfort for kids. Because, they would force to learn lessons in school were could not allow to do their own interest things. So this kind of activities may be make students dislike academic subjects in early time. Some education survey is point out this problem in last year. In conclusion, every system or plans should receive some positive and negative impact while advantages of pre - primary school education outweigt disadvantages. So, it is a better curriculum for all children in their childhood and parents should be allows kids in these kind of school.
At present advance
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remarkable teaching methods in
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, online
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pre-school
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is necessity in stating time of
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. After effect of this procedure has
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a convenient
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benefits
among the children and
also
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difficulties in
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. In this essay illustrates the pros and cons for preschool learning in childhood.

One of the main benefit for this
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system
is
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easy
way to mingle in Environment and
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society
.
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rules
from their family.
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get
better chance to explore in new environment and
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society
.
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, they communicate with
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different
culture students and various personality.
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facts
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starting in academic career.
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of nursery provide variety activities like, game,
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entartainment
problems.

Furthermore
, this
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of
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should provide basic knowledge for main academic subjects like, mathematics, science, social science and languages. In all
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pre
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-
primary
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words in language, description for number and facts in science by using
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some
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kind
of
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entartainment
games.
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this type of impressive method of teachings can be helpful for remember in whole life of a child.
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,
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some
students are going in National level mathematics competition at their young age.

Similarly
, every
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system
provides
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some
opposite reaction while this
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education
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make
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some
financial issues
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carring
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economically
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also
this certificate is
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help
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get
a seat in primary
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easily
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to learn
lessons
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interest things.
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students dislike academic subjects in early time.
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survey is point out this problem in last year.

In conclusion
, every
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or plans should receive
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positive
and
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impact while advantages of
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-
primary
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outweigt
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, it is a better curriculum for all children in their childhood and parents should be
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kids in these
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IELTS essay discuss advantages and disadvantages of sending children to preschool at a young age.

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413 words
5.5
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