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problems of searching information in the Internet in order to use libraries

problems of searching information in the Internet in order to use libraries 3abE5
While libraries were the most prevalent place for searching for data in the past, at the present students acquire knowledge from online databases. Although immediately access for an infinite range of information have own benefits, disadvantages of online sources generate problems such as the spread of fallacies and plagiarism One way to eradicate the problem of distribution of fake information is providing a reliable source such as online libraries for each country or university and forbidding of using data from not reliable sources such as Wikipedia, personal blogs, YouTube channels. For instance, a majority of students get knowledge from Wikipedia, which are edited by anyone, who have accounts at Wikipedia. That is why, material from this kind of source can be fake or altered. Hence, by providing a single system of online libraries it is possible to avoid doubtful data Further action can be taken for dealing with plagiarism. If the government would tighten laws or supply new Bill about literary property, which would forbid using or alteration of info without indication of primary source, students will know the real author of works and will not use material without footnotes. As a result rate of plagiarism will decrease
While libraries were the most prevalent place for searching for data in the past, at the present students acquire knowledge from
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online
databases. Although immediately access for an infinite range of information have
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own
benefits, disadvantages of
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online
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sources
generate problems such as the spread of fallacies and
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plagiarism


One way to eradicate the problem of distribution of fake information is providing a reliable
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source
such as
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online
libraries for each country or university and forbidding of using data from not reliable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
such as Wikipedia, personal blogs, YouTube channels.
For instance
, a majority of students
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get
knowledge from Wikipedia, which
are edited
by anyone, who have accounts at Wikipedia.
That is
why, material from this kind of
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source
can be fake or altered.
Hence
, by providing a single system of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
libraries it is possible to avoid doubtful data

Further
action can
be taken
for dealing with plagiarism. If the
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government
Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)
would tighten
laws or supply new Bill about literary property, which would forbid using or alteration of info without indication of primary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
, students will know the real author of works and will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
material without footnotes.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a result rate of plagiarism will
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decrease
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IELTS essay problems of searching information in the Internet in order to use libraries

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
197 words
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