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Discribe a dish that you like to cook

Discribe a dish that you like to cook 117oy
I am a food lover and love to cook for myself as well as for others. Moreover, for me, it is the best way to relieve stress. Therefore, I try to cook different types of cuisines at home. However, my favorite dish is Pho. So today I will recommend this dish to everyone. It is a traditional food in Vietnam. I learned how to do it through youtube videos. Pho has a rather complicated way of cooking. To have a good pot of soup, we need to have many different kinds of spices such as anise, cinnamon, etc; and the most important thing is the bones. Those bones needed to be cooked for long hours to get the sweet and tasty stock, and then we combine other ingredients. The noodle is also special since it is not like other kinds of noodles. It is made from rice flour, and it is thicker than the others. After pouring the stock into a bowl of noodles, the next step is to put on the beef slices and other toppings. I like to eat rare beef slices and meatballs, and they are also the basic toppings that Vietnamese people like to choose. We finish the bowl with some basil, coriander, bean sprout, and black pepper. Besides, we can also other side dishes to eat with Pho like bagel twists and lemon. I used to eat this dish at my birthday party. I am very happy to be able to cook Pho for everyone. It was the funniest birthday party I've ever had
I am a food lover and
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love
to cook for myself
as well
as for others.
Moreover
, for me, it is the best way to relieve
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stress
.
Therefore
, I try to cook
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different
types of cuisines at home.
However
, my favorite
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dish
is
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Pho
.
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So
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today
I will recommend this
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dish
to everyone. It is a traditional food in Vietnam. I learned how to do it through
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youtube
videos.
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Pho
has a
rather
complicated way of cooking. To have a
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good
pot of soup, we need to have
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many
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different
kinds of spices such as anise, cinnamon, etc; and the most
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important
thing is the bones. Those bones needed to
be cooked
for long hours to
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get
the sweet and tasty stock, and then we combine
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other
ingredients. The noodle is
also
special since it is not like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
kinds of noodles. It
is made
from rice flour, and it is thicker than the others. After pouring the stock into a bowl of noodles, the
next
step is to put on the beef slices and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
toppings. I like to eat rare beef slices and meatballs, and they are
also
the basic toppings that Vietnamese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
like to choose. We finish the bowl with
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some
basil, coriander, bean sprout, and black pepper.
Besides
, we can
also
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other
side
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dishes
to eat with
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Pho
like bagel twists and lemon. I
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used
to eat this
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dish
at my birthday party. I am
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very
happy to be able to cook
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Pho
for everyone. It was the funniest birthday party I've ever
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had

IELTS essay Discribe a dish that you like to cook

Essay
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1 paragraphs
258 words
5.0
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