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Disadvantages of social media

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As we know, social network have some problems effect on teenagers. It may contain some disadvantages that will be shown in this article. According to Briggs (2014), overusing Facebook may affect girls' mental health badly by comparing their body images with others. Weale (2015) states that social media could cause some panic attacks for the night users. Thompson (2013) he presents the idea of how some teens are affected by social media and can't enjoy their real life. Briggs (2014), teenagers who engage with social media during the night could damage their sleeping quality. In conclusion, overusing or using the social with wrong way, it may bring some bad effect on our mental health. Luna Li, Khalid Alghamdi, Fahad Alkhaldi
As we know,
social
network have
some
problems effect on
teenagers
. It may contain
some
disadvantages that will
be shown
in this article. According to Briggs (2014), overusing Facebook may affect girls' mental health
badly
by comparing their body images with others.
Weale
(2015) states that
social
media could cause
some
panic attacks for the night users. Thompson (2013) he presents the
idea
of how
some
teens are
affected
by
social
media and can't enjoy their real life. Briggs (2014),
teenagers
who engage with
social
media during the night could damage their sleeping quality.
In conclusion
, overusing or using the
social
with
wrong
way, it may bring
some
bad
effect on our mental health.

Luna Li, Khalid
Alghamdi
, Fahad
Alkhaldi
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IELTS essay Disadvantages of social media

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