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It can’t be denied that shopping online brings people many benefits in life, but it also has many drawbacks. First at all, the quality of product is one of aspects which is complained the most by costumers. Because buyer do not come directly, they can not check or touch the product that lead to buyer can receive a product which is not the same as discribe or picture of shop. For example, color, material or design of clothes can be different from picture. Another problem of shopping online is delivery service. A number of costumers complain about shopping fee because they have to pay a sum of money for shipping that is more expensive than the price of product. Moreover, buyers must pay totally fee, if they want to returning product. Finally, many people are worry about safety of customers especially in the pandemic situation. Buyer have to contact with shipper who contact with many others people so it can be cause of infection. In short, shopping online has many benefits, but costumer should careful buy to protect themselves.
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shopping
online brings
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many
benefits in life,
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it
also
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many
drawbacks.
First
at all, the quality of
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product
is one of aspects which
is complained
the most by costumers.
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Because
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buyer
do not
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come
directly
, they can not
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check
or touch the
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product
that lead to
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buyer
can receive a
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product
which is not the same as
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discribe
or picture of shop.
For example
, color, material or design of clothes can be
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different
from picture. Another problem of
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shopping
online is delivery service. A number of costumers complain about
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shopping
fee
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because
they
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have to
pay a sum of money for shipping
that is
more expensive than the price of
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product
.
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,
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buyers
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must
pay
totally
fee, if they want to
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returning
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product
.
Finally
,
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many
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people
are worry about safety of customers
especially
in the pandemic situation.
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Buyer
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have
to contact with shipper who contact with
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many
others
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people
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so
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be cause
of infection. In short,
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shopping
online has
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many
benefits,
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costumer should careful
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buy
to protect themselves.
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IELTS essay disadvantages of shopping online

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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