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Disadvantages and advantages of fire

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Fire is one of the element which provides heat as well as comfort. Through out the world, fire is being used many different way. There are some drawbacks that are overlooked from time to time. To start with, there are two main advantages of fire. First, it keeps human as well as animal warm. During winter season, fire is necessity for human due to the warmth it provides for our body’s temperature. Secondly, fire is primarily used for cooking. It cooks meats and vegetables for human to consume their cooked meal safely. On the other hand, there are some downsides. Irresponsibility can caused fire to spread out like hell. Moreover, the flame produced CO2 which destroyed the ozone layer. To sum everything up that has been stated, although fire has certain disadvantages such as it could possibly heat our planet up and can spread easily, it has more positive impact for all living creature. Taking good care with fire is crucial in order to keep other people safe.

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