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A time when you didn’t share a truth with your best friend

A time when you didn’t share a truth with your best friend JLl1B
Well! Usually, I don't keep any secrets from my friends. However, once I had told lie to my friends, and after a few days, I said the truth about it to my best friend Jay. I selected only him to tell that very important truth to him because I trust him. It was about my visa for which I had to tell lie initially. All my friends were asking about my visa application result whether I got visa or not. Actually, all my friends were expecting a big party if I would get the visa, but due to some financial reason, because, i too much money spent on my study visa application. That's why I said everyone that I didn't get selected, and a few days later I thought I must at least inform my bestie so I spill the beans to him. When I disclosed this lie, he was so happy and in excitement, he started to dance. Then he yelled at me for the lie and when I explained the reason, he said that we could have managed it but this lie takes away other friends' happiness. After a while then disclosed with other friends too. It was very important for me to tell the truth to at least one of my friends because I felt that when they will know from other sources they would never trust me. From that moment I always tell truth no matter what and will also keep practicing this habit
Well!
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, I don't
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keep
any secrets from my
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friends
.
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, once I had
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told
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lie
to my
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friends
, and after a few days, I said the
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truth
about it to my best
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friend
Jay. I selected
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only
him to
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tell
that
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very
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truth
to him
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because
I trust him.

It was about my visa for which I had to
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tell
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lie
initially
. All my
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friends
were asking about my visa application result whether I
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got
visa or not. Actually, all my
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friends
were expecting a
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big
party if I would
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get
the visa,
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but
due to
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some
financial reason,
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because
, i too much money spent on my study visa application. That's why I said everyone that I didn't
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get
selected, and a few days later I
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thought
I
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must
at least inform my bestie
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so
I spill the beans to him.

When I disclosed this
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lie
, he was
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so
happy and in excitement, he
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started
to dance. Then he yelled at me for the
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lie
and when I
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explained
the reason, he said that we could have managed it
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but
this
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lie
takes away other friends' happiness. After a while then disclosed with other
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friends
too.

It was
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very
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important
for me to
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tell
the
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truth
to at least one of my
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friends
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because
I felt that when they will know from other sources they would never trust me. From that moment I always
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tell
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truth
no matter what and will
also
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keep
practicing this
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IELTS essay A time when you didn’t share a truth with your best friend

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
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