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Difficulties about getting sleep

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Sleep deprivation is the most customary issue in present times. majority of people are affected by this. The principal cause for this is stress, derived from work or surroundings and a viable solution is to introduce a change in lifestyle along with a number of therapy techniques. People who suffer from lack of sleep, are prone to chronic diseases for instance cancer, obesity, depression, type 2 diabetes. As per physician’s consideration, human body requires minimum seven to eight hours sleep to rejuvenate themselves. In today’s sedentary lifestyle nobody has enough time to sleep because of their job requirements or others family commitments. This leads to stress, depression and anxiety. World health organisation recently published a report and stated that fifty five percent people who are unhappy and miserable in their life is, owing to sleeplessness. The most viable solution for this inadequate sleep issue is meditation along with a number of sleep therapies. Meditation is the superior way to bring out positive thoughts by releasing stress. Moreover, sleeping therapies improve sleeping habits and lessen the probability of chronically diseased. Along with that a specific regime of sleep and wake up will be an additional help to this. To conclude, work- centric life has made society dejected as well as unhappy, because of workload and family responsibilities. Being aware about mediation and sleeping therapies society may lead to the lack of sleep suspension.
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deprivation is the most customary issue in present times.
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stress
, derived from work or surroundings and a viable solution is to introduce a
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change
in lifestyle along with a number of
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therapy
techniques.

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People
who suffer from lack of
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sleep
, are prone to chronic diseases
for instance
cancer, obesity, depression, type 2 diabetes. As per physician’s consideration, human body requires minimum seven to eight hours
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sleep
to rejuvenate themselves. In
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today
’s sedentary lifestyle nobody has
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enough
time to
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sleep
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of their job requirements or others family commitments. This leads to
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, depression and anxiety.

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who are unhappy and miserable in their life is, owing to

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sleeplessness
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The most viable solution for this inadequate
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sleep
issue is meditation along with a number of
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sleep
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therapies
. Meditation is the superior way to bring out
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positive
thoughts by releasing
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stress
.
Moreover
, sleeping
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therapies
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improve
sleeping habits and lessen the probability of
chronically
diseased. Along with that a specific regime of
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and wake up will be an additional
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help
to this.

To conclude
, work- centric life has made society dejected
as well
as unhappy,
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because
of workload and family responsibilities. Being aware about mediation and sleeping
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therapies
society may lead to the lack of
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suspension.
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IELTS essay Difficulties about getting sleep

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
232 words
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