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Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion? v.2

Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion? v. 2
There is no doubt these days healthy food are contributing of healthy health. However, the question: Does the healthy food modifies our lives to healthy one? Is considered one of the most controversial questions today. In this essay I am going to examine both viewpoints. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is the statistics, which showed the percentage of the people who used to eat and sleep, healthy have a much less proportion of cancer and heart diseases. In the USA for example, most of the citizens are eating junk food and then after many years they get overweight and then absolutely the will start to complain about signs and symptoms of heart diseases. Moreover, It is also possible to say that there is a relationship between dieting and age good illustration for this the oldest people who used to eat and drink healthy in the entire of their life are living much longer than those who do not care about their lifestyle. On the other hand, It is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that there are no advantages from having certain a good lifestyle people are having this opinion because they do not have enough time to prepare their healthy food. In addition, some of them, they do not have adequate money to buy a healthy food. A particularly good example in this Diet Centre versus Mcdonalsd, if we compare the prices of those restaurants the fast food restaurant is much cheaper than healthy food. We have seen there is no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the healthy food and drink could bring health and better life for our generation.
There is no doubt these days
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healthy
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food
are contributing of
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healthy
health.
However
, the question: Does the
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healthy
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food
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modifies
our
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lives
to
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healthy
one?
Is considered
one of the most controversial questions
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today
. In this essay I am going to examine both viewpoints.

On one side of the argument there are
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people
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who
argue that the benefits
considerably
outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is the statistics, which
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showed
the percentage of the
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people
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who
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used
to eat and sleep,
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healthy
have a much less proportion of cancer and heart diseases. In the USA
for example
, most of the citizens are eating junk
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food
and then after
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many
years they
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get
overweight and then
absolutely
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the
will
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start
to complain about signs and symptoms of heart diseases.

Moreover
, It is
also
possible to say that there is a relationship between dieting and age
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good
illustration for this the oldest
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people
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who
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used
to eat and drink
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healthy
in the entire of their life are living much longer than those
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who
do not care about their lifestyle.

On the other hand
, It is
also
possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is
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often
argued that there are no advantages from having certain a
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good
lifestyle
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people
are having this opinion
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because
they do not have
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enough
time to prepare their
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healthy
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food
.
In addition
,
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some
of them, they do not have adequate money to
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buy
a
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healthy
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. A
particularly
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example in this Diet
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Mcdonalsd
, if we compare the prices of those restaurants the
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fast
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food
restaurant is much cheaper than
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healthy
food.

We have
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seen
there is no easy answers to this question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that the
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healthy
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food
and drink could bring health and better life for our generation.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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