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Diet on whole world, is it good to take a diet

Diet on whole world, is it good to take a diet 9aNb3

Almost 90% of women today want a beautiful figure. That is why we are able to find a diet programme almost everywhere in the country. Most of the women have thought and gone on a diet before either to slim down or just for health problems. A proper diet programme will help you not only to slim down but also to have healthier eating habits. For instance, taking more vegetables and fruits than meat, avoid fried food and carbonated drinks. For a diet programme, people shouldn’t cut themselves from food and water. There are some diet programmes from the doctors that help you to have a healthy heart like the “Three day diet” which we can find on the Internet. This programme allows you to eat fruits and also some meat. This way of dieting will help you to avoid some of the health problems in the future like diabetes or a heart attack. However, some people do not only go on a diet but they avoid eating and go hungry for the whole day. All they have is just either water or juices. Also there a people who buy special diet programmes over the counter like taking pills which are not approved by the health department and they are doing so without consulting a doctor first. They do not follow the basic rules of dieting and this will lead them to some serious health problems like dysfunction of some body parts or, even worse, death. In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with going on a diet as long as we follow the correct way of eating and for a good reason.

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