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diet and health : the basic purposes of food and the reasons people choose their food

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The speaker discusses the topic called “ diet and health”, including two main points: the basic purposes of food and the reasons people choose their food. To start, she makes two assumptions about why people choose the food they consume that are nutritious and pleasurable. First, she mentioned that eating for nourishment is one out of two reasons because when people consume food transformed into nutritious and digestive substances. Besides, enjoyment is the second factor contributing to what people decide to eat. Secondly, the speaker brings up the differences between French and American attitudes toward food. The French tend to consume food based on their gratification however they still are healthier and thinner than Americans who contemplate eating fat as a poison but can’t help ingesting them. Additionally, eating food relates to two main appearances of feeling, namely, happiness and culpability; to illustrate, Americans seem to feel guilty in contrast to the French take it as a celebration. Due to this, the French tend to enjoy and stay healthier than the Americans even though they consume the same type of food. Eating rules are taken as the main reason to affect people's diet because Americans tend to concentrate on nutrition while setting their meals. French nevertheless strict their eating habits. To sum up, choosing foods is a complicated activity that does not only require nutrition, digestion knowledge but also understanding science, society, emotional information to know what food we should eat.
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“
diet and health”, including two main points: the basic purposes of
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food
and the reasons
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people
choose their
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food
. To
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, she
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two assumptions about why
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people
choose the
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food
they
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consume
that are nutritious and pleasurable.

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, she mentioned that
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eating
for nourishment is one out of two reasons
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because
when
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people
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consume
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food
transformed into nutritious and digestive substances.
Besides
, enjoyment is the second factor contributing to what
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people
decide to eat.
Secondly
, the speaker brings up the differences between French and American attitudes toward
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food
. The French tend to
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consume
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food
based on their gratification
however
they
still
are healthier and thinner than Americans who contemplate
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eating
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fat
as a poison
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can’t
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help
ingesting them.
Additionally
,
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eating
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food
relates to two main appearances of feeling,
namely
, happiness and culpability; to illustrate, Americans seem to feel guilty
in contrast
to the French take it as a celebration. Due to this, the French tend to enjoy and stay healthier than the Americans
even though
they
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consume
the same type of
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food
.
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Eating
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rules
are taken
as the main reason to affect
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people
's diet
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because
Americans tend to concentrate on nutrition while setting their meals. French
nevertheless
strict their
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eating
habits. To sum up, choosing
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foods
is a complicated activity that does not
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only
require nutrition, digestion knowledge
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but
also
understanding science, society, emotional information to know what
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food
we should eat.
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IELTS essay diet and health: the basic purposes of food and the reasons people choose their food

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
241 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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