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Diagram of how electricity is created from hydroelectricity power station.

Diagram of how electricity is created from hydroelectricity power station. 6a32x
The pictorial representation elicits the power generation from the hydroelectric power station. There are total six steps for the production of electricity which is stated below in further paragraphs. Firstly, water plays a vital role in the power generation from the hydroelectric power station, so water is first stored in the high-lever reservoir, which is attached to the dam and dam gates acts as hindrance for the flow of river. At that time, water is in the potential form of energy. Secondly, while in the day time, the gates are open so that water can go through pan stack to the reversible turbine which leads to transformation of energy from potential to kinetic form of energy. Then after, due to high velocity of flowing water turbine starts to rotate and the turbine is connected to the generator through shaft. In the further step, by passing through turbine water goes to low-level reservoir. However, this cycle is reversed in the night time, water passes from low-lever to high-level and the reversible turbine acts as a pump. Lastly, as the turbine rotates which makes the plates of generator to move and this creates electricity and then by power lines it is distributed to the national grid. Overall, reversible turbine is the main component in the power generation from the hydroelectric power station because in day time it operates generator and in the night time it act as pump, to pump water from low-level to high-level.
The pictorial representation elicits the
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generation from the hydroelectric
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power
station. There are total six steps for the production of electricity which
is stated
below in
further
paragraphs.

Firstly
,
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water
plays a vital role in the
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power
generation from the hydroelectric
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power
station,
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so
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water
is
first
stored in the high-lever reservoir, which
is attached
to the dam and dam gates acts as hindrance for the flow of river. At that
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time
,
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water
is in the potential form of energy.
Secondly
, while in the day
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time
, the gates are open
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so
that
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water
can go through pan stack to the reversible
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turbine
which leads to transformation of energy from potential to kinetic form of energy.

Then after, due to high velocity of flowing
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water
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turbine
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starts
to rotate and the
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turbine
is connected
to the generator through shaft. In the
further
step, by passing through
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turbine
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water
goes to low-level reservoir.
However
, this cycle
is reversed
in the night
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time
,
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water
passes from low-lever to high-level and the reversible
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turbine
acts as a pump.
Lastly
, as the
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turbine
rotates which
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makes
the plates of generator to
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move
and this creates electricity and then by
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power
lines it
is distributed
to the national grid.

Overall
, reversible
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turbine
is the main component in the
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power
generation from the hydroelectric
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power
station
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because
in day
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time
it operates generator and in the night
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time
it
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act
as pump, to pump
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water
from low-level to high-level.
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IELTS essay Diagram of how electricity is created from hydroelectricity power station.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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