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Many persons believe that for a children reading book is good thing rather than watching TV or playing games in computers. I totally agree to this statement and in next paragraph I will give reasons of my opinion. There are so many benefits for reading a stories from a book for children. Firstly, from a reading a book children can develop imagination power, ability of concentration. They also improve their communication and social skills. For example, by reading a story books like akabar-birbal children become more clever. Secondly, watching TV or playing games in computer can become addictive for children and to get rid that bad habit can be difficult. Moreover use of tv and computer more than enough time can also be harmful for children’s health specially for their eyes. It may also distract children from studies. To conclude, I strongly believe that reading a stories from a book is very beneficiary and good habit for children with no harmful reasons.
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IELTS essay dhvds dshcd hdcf jaehcukac cqcjcfiowjvd jadhcuwadd vcadjcvn

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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