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Technological devices should be allowed at school to facilitate the teaching and learning process.

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In fact, equipping them with technological appliances, including computers, projectors will help students gain a lot of knowledge during delivering lectures. For instance, during the lessons, teachers use powerpoint to show vivid images in lieu of conventional words, students will effortlessly absorb the lecture and gain a better understanding of the course. As a consequence, students have a lot of motivation to maintain and develop to get high academic achievements.
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knowledge during delivering lectures.
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, during the lessons, teachers
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use
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to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
vivid images in lieu of conventional words, students will
effortlessly
absorb the lecture and gain a better understanding of the course. As a consequence, students have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
motivation to maintain and develop to
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get
high academic achievements.
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IELTS essay Technological devices should be allowed at school to facilitate the teaching and learning process.

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70 words
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