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development between countries. The first reason why international travels would never bring conflict is rooted in the fact that both visitors and locals are economically motivated. International travel opens up opportunities for business development throughout the world. Entrepreneurs are interested not only in the domestic market but also in the overseas market. Foreigners should learn the culture of a country before winning over the local people. In turn, locals should show their hospitality to visitors in exchange for their trust. They share a view that acceptance of each other's cultural background is a necessary condition for cooperation. Understanding a culture has other implications. Differences in social background, cultural values and religious belief might make the discrepancy of foreigners and local inhabitants on some issues indelible; however, the higher interaction, the higher level of communication and understanding. Arabians, for example, used to consider westerners as their foes. Now they have concrete relations with their western allies in many fields. In the initial stage, their divergence seemed inherent but overtime, with better mutual understanding, they take the same position on many issues. Undeniably, it is likely that in some resorts, foreign visitors repel the local community with their scant regard for the local environment and conventions when they first arrive. However, it should be noted that most offense is accidental, rather than intentional. Instead, visitors disobey rules and conventions simply because they have no knowledge of them. This situation is expected to be improved with the passing of time when visitors from different countries increase their knowledge of a local culture. According to the above analysis, we can observe that the increase in the international travel should not be taken as the cause of any conflict that arises between two countries. Alternatively, one should recognise its role in improving mutual understanding between two countries.
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development
between
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countries
. The
first
reason why international travels would never bring conflict
is rooted
in the fact that both
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visitors
and
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locals
are
economically
motivated. International travel opens up opportunities for business development throughout the world. Entrepreneurs
are interested
not
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only
in the domestic market
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but
also
in the overseas market. Foreigners should learn the culture of a
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country
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before
winning over the
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local
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people
. In turn,
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locals
should
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show
their hospitality to
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visitors
in exchange for their trust. They share a view that acceptance of each other's cultural background is a necessary condition for cooperation.
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Understanding
a culture has other implications. Differences in social background, cultural values and religious belief might
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make
the discrepancy of foreigners and
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local
inhabitants on
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some
issues indelible;
however
, the higher interaction, the higher level of communication and
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understanding
. Arabians,
for example
,
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used
to consider westerners as their foes.
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Now
they have concrete relations with their western allies in
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many
fields. In the initial stage, their divergence seemed inherent
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but
overtime, with better mutual
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understanding
, they take the same position on
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many
issues.
Undeniably
, it is likely that in
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some
resorts, foreign
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visitors
repel the
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local
community with their scant regard for the
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local
environment and conventions when they
first
arrive.
However
, it should
be noted
that most offense is accidental,
rather
than intentional.
Instead
,
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visitors
disobey
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rules
and conventions
simply
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because
they have no knowledge of them. This situation is
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expected
to be
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improved
with the passing of time when
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visitors
from
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different
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countries
increase their knowledge of a
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local
culture. According to the above analysis, we can observe that the increase in the international travel should not
be taken
as the cause of any conflict that arises between two
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countries
.
Alternatively
, one should
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recognise
its role in improving mutual
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understanding
between two
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countries
.
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IELTS essay development between countries

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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