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today lots of people buy his own vehicle is its good or bad

today lots of people buy his own vehicle is its good or bad 7a0Ln

In this technological era, technology is developing day by day. Every nation rose up due to advent of that lots of peoples purchase own vehicle to move to and fro to save their time also reach their destination before time. it has lots of pros and corns firstly, personal vehicle helps us to go anywhere at any time because you are free to move anywhere according to your schedule without wasting your time for waiting public transportation. another benefit is that you can feel relax, comfortable also you can stop at some places according to your preference like if you see some something eye-catching, you stop your vehicle and enjoy that place or moment. Secondly private transportation is free from huzzle-buzzle and noise. On the flip side, buying own vehicle is not simple it takes lots of money. the main disadvantage of personal vehicle is that it creates rush on the road in addition to that, it creates lots of pollution for example in Delhi government pass a law of even and odd number, that helps to decrease the numbers of privates vehicles runs on the road to control the pollution and traffic. due to that our environment is polluted that is bad for health. to sum up, its good to buy personal vehicle but its used when its necessary and use public vehicle to go to their work or somewhere.

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lots
 of peoples This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
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own
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vehicle
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move
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firstly
, personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicle
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helps
 us to go anywhere at any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
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because
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move
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time
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another
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some
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see
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some
 something eye-catching, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
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vehicle
 and enjoy that place or moment. Secondly
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huzzle-buzzle
 and noise.

On the flip side, buying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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vehicle
 is not simple it takes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoodles
lots
 of money. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 main disadvantage of personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicle
 is that it creates rush on the road in addition
 to that, it creates You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoodles
lots
 of pollution for example
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government
 pass a law of even and odd number, that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to decrease the numbers of privates You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
 runs on the road to control the pollution and traffic.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDue
due
 to that our environment is polluted
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 for health.

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to
 sum up, its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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vehicle
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used
 when its necessary and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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vehicle
 to go to their work or somewhere. 