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Developed countries have an obligation to help developing countries with aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

Developed countries have an obligation to help developing countries with aid. with this viewpoint? NrwYW
There has always been a gap between the haves and the have-nots, the rich countries and the poor countries. Is it necessary for developed nations to lend a helping hand to developing nations? A number of people claim that each country must take care of their own concerns. However, I believe that aid from rich nations will be advantageous to poor nations, for the following reasons. To begin with, global financial analysts are concerned that financial assistance from developed countries is detrimental to the economies of developing countries because economic aid from wealthy nations increases developing nations' dependency on their donor countries. However, extra funding from rich countries supports the economic growth of poor countries as the funds are used to carry out key national development projects. For instance, Indonesia government uses financial support from wealthy nations to build toll roads in several regions and reconstruct tourism infrastructure in a myriad of Indonesia tourist spots. Another point to consider is aid from wealthy nations, which in terms of the health sector, is deleterious to developing nations. This is because health aids from developed countries sometimes contain a hidden agenda. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, health-foreign-owned firms benefited from health-equipment help offered by rich countries to poor countries. However, support in the health sector from wealthy countries assists to alleviate health issues in developing countries. Developed nations have the resources not only to produce high quality medical equipment but also to develop medicines for new diseases. For instance, to combat the epidemic, Indonesia has obtained a multitude of health assistance from developed nations. Millions of extra vaccines have been donated by the United States, Australia, and the United Kingdom in order to accelerate Indonesia's inoculation programme. What is more, Indonesia has also received medical supplies from European nations. In conclusion, despite the potential negative impacts of various types of aid provided by developed nations to developing nations, I believe that the benefits exceed the drawbacks, particularly when it comes to the financial and health sectors.
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rich
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countries
and the
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poor
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countries
. Is it necessary for
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developed
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nations
to lend a helping hand to
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developing
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nations
? A number of
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people
claim that each
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country
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must
take care of their
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own
concerns.
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aid
from
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rich
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nations
will be advantageous to
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poor
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, for the following reasons.

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begin
with, global
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financial
analysts
are concerned
that
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financial
assistance from
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developed
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countries
is detrimental to the economies of
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developing
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countries
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because
economic
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aid
from
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wealthy
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nations
increases
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developing
nations' dependency on their donor
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countries
.
However
, extra funding from
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rich
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countries
supports the economic growth of
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poor
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countries
as the funds are
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used
to carry out key national development projects.
For instance
, Indonesia
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government
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uses
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financial
support from
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wealthy
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nations
to build toll roads in several regions and reconstruct tourism infrastructure in a myriad of Indonesia tourist spots.

Another point to consider is
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aid
from
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wealthy
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nations
, which in terms of the
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health
sector, is deleterious to
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developing
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nations
. This is
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because
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health
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aids
from
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developed
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countries
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sometimes
contain a hidden agenda.
For example
, during the Covid-19 pandemic, health-foreign-
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owned
firms benefited from health-equipment
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help
offered by
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rich
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countries
to
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poor
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countries
.
However
, support in the
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health
sector from
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wealthy
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countries
assists to alleviate
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health
issues in
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developing
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countries
.
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have the resources not
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only
to produce high quality medical equipment
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also
to develop medicines for new diseases.
For instance
, to combat the epidemic, Indonesia has obtained a multitude of
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health
assistance from
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developed
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nations
. Millions of extra vaccines have
been donated
by the United States, Australia, and the United Kingdom in order to accelerate Indonesia's inoculation
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programme
.
What is more
, Indonesia has
also
received medical supplies from European nations.

In conclusion
, despite the potential
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negative
impacts of various types of
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aid
provided by
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developed
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nations
to
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developing
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, I believe that the benefits exceed the drawbacks,
particularly
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comes
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financial
and
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sectors.
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IELTS essay Developed countries have an obligation to help developing countries with aid. with this viewpoint?

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