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These days many students are choosing to study abroad, what are the Advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days many students are choosing to study abroad, what are the Advantages and disadvantages of this? 3a0DJ
Nowadays, Studying in universities other than home-country universities is becoming more and more popular. I think this could have two main positives and two major negatives. Starting with the positives of studying abroad, the first one could be experiencing different cultures. To be a student in a foreign country and living there, give people a chance to become familiar with different cultures and traditions from theirs which can expand their vision and be useful in their path of life. Another positive aspect of completing studies in a country other than a home country could be making international friends from different countries. During the time period in which you are studying in university or college, there is an opportunity to meet folk from different parts of the world which can lead to a life-long friendship. There are many students who after graduating decide to move to those countries where they had a chance of getting to know people from there and receiving an amazing impression from their culture. Turning to the negatives of studying abroad, not learning in your own jargon could be an issue. Some subjects which are taught in university have their own specific terms which are quite different from everyday language. When it comes to learning terminology in a language other than yours, it can lead to confusion if you plan to return to your own country after graduation and start working in a profession which you have learnt the technical terms in another language language. Another problem in this regard could be the financial issues and living expenses. Paying for tuition fees and accommodation and other living expenses are important issues when it comes to studying abroad. Either your family or your government has to afford all the expenses, which can lead to a big debt after being graduated graduating which has to be paid back. In conclusion, experiencing different cultures and traditions and meeting people from other parts of the world could be the benefits that studying abroad could bring to our lives, but we should not forget that it may lead to some problems such as the difficulty of using professional language and being in-depth after finishing studies.
Nowadays,
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this could have two main positives and two major negatives.

Starting with the positives of
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studying
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, the
first
one could be experiencing
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different
cultures. To be a student in a foreign
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country
and living there, give
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people
a chance to become familiar with
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different
cultures and traditions from theirs which can expand their vision and be useful in their path of life.

Another
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positive
aspect of completing studies in a
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country
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other
than a home
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country
could be making international friends from
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different
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countries
. During the time period in which you are
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in
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university
or college, there is an opportunity to
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meet
folk from
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different
parts of the world which can
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lead
to a life-long friendship. There are
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students who after graduating decide to
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to those
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countries
where they had a chance of getting to know
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people
from there and receiving an amazing impression from their culture.

Turning to the negatives of
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jargon could be an issue.
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subjects which
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have their
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specific terms which are quite
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different
from everyday
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language
. When it
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comes
to learning terminology in a
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language
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other
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lead
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own
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country
after graduation and
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working in a profession which you have
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the technical terms in another
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language
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language
. Another problem in this regard could be the financial issues and living expenses. Paying for tuition fees and accommodation and
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other
living expenses are
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cultures and traditions and meeting
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people
from
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parts of the world could be the benefits that
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studying
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could bring to our
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,
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we should not forget that it may
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lead
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some
problems such as the difficulty of using professional
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language
and being in-depth after finishing studies.
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IELTS essay These days many students are choosing to study abroad, what are the Advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
363 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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