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Determinants of imminent fracture risk in postmenopausal women with osteoporosis.

Determinants of imminent fracture risk in postmenopausal women with osteoporosis. 8G66B
Osteoporotic fractures are associated with direct patient burden in terms of morbidity and mortality and also exert a significant societal economic burden stemming from direct healthcare resource use (hospitalizations, outpatient visits, prescription medication, rehabilitation, and long-term care), direct nonmedical costs (transportation, caregivers), and indirect costs (time and work impact on family caregivers, lost patient productivity, early retirement) [1–6]. Despite the magnitude of these clinical and economic burdens and the availability of effective treatments, osteoporosis is often undertreated. Suboptimal treatment is an issue even among women with a history of osteoporotic fracture, whose risk is particularly elevated for another fracture. As few as one of every four Medicare patients in the USA received treatment after fracture [7, 8].
Osteoporotic
fractures
are associated
with direct patient burden in terms of morbidity and mortality and
also
exert a significant societal economic burden stemming from direct healthcare resource
use
(hospitalizations, outpatient visits, prescription medication, rehabilitation, and long-term care), direct
nonmedical
costs (transportation, caregivers), and indirect costs (time and work impact on family caregivers, lost patient productivity, early retirement) [1–6]. Despite the magnitude of these clinical and economic burdens and the availability of effective treatments, osteoporosis is
often
undertreated
. Suboptimal treatment is an issue even among women with a history of
osteoporotic
fracture
, whose
risk
is
particularly
elevated for another
fracture
. As few as one of every four Medicare patients in the USA received treatment after
fracture
[7, 8].
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IELTS essay Determinants of imminent fracture risk in postmenopausal women with osteoporosis.

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